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 BeeW
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R for me. I thought this story would either be a winner or rejected as it has a very strong political message that would put off Trumpers. I feel like it'll be easy to get traction in Australian markets though.

V37Q1: HM
V37Q2: HM
V37Q3: R
V37Q4: ?

 
Posted : November 3, 2020 4:54 pm
crlisle
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wotf056 I got a Silver HM!
Thank you Wulf Moon and Martin L. Shoemaker for all your help!

Vol. 36: 3rd -- R, 4th -- R
Vol. 37: 1st -- R, 2nd -- HM, 3rd -- HM, 4th -- SHM
Vol. 38: 1st -- HM, 2nd -- HM, 3rd -- HM, 4th -- HM
Vol. 39: 1st -- SHM, 2nd -- RWC, 3rd -- RWC, 4th -- HM
Vol. 40: 1st -- HM, 2nd -- R, 3rd -- RWC, 4th -- R
Vol. 41: 1st - R, 2nd -- pending, 3rd -- WIP

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Posted : November 3, 2020 5:00 pm
Rey Nichols
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R...which was surprising, but I really proud of it and gonna try it in a different market Smile

SHM: 1
HM: 9
R: 1
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Posted : November 3, 2020 5:12 pm
LambentTyto
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Silver Honorable Mention for me!

 
Posted : November 3, 2020 5:25 pm
(@kentagions)
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HM #12

Congratulations everyone. Early returns are looking good.

 
Posted : November 3, 2020 5:36 pm
Beth Powers
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wotf056

After many years and many HMs, I got my first Silver Honorable Mention! I'm pretty excited about this one!

Beth Powers
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Silver HM x 5
HM x 20
Entries x 66
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Collected Stories:
Sorcery & Widgets
Runes & Rivets

 
Posted : November 3, 2020 6:05 pm
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wotf056

After many years and many HMs, I got my first Silver Honorable Mention! I'm pretty excited about this one!

Super-duper happy for you, Beth! I know you worked for that one. One ring closer to the bullseye now! Congrats!

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Posted : November 3, 2020 6:21 pm
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wotf056 I got a Silver HM!
Thank you Wulf Moon and Martin L. Shoemaker for all your help!

You’re welcome, Candice. You did the work and studied hard. It’s why you’ve made amazing progress! Congratulations!

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Posted : November 3, 2020 6:23 pm
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Oh snap!!

Was watching election returns and just got this notice

wotf057 wotf057 wotf057

Woohoo! Best I've done in the contest so far. Smile Congrats to everyone who entered, and who placed in one way or another.

Congratulations, Michael! One ring from the bullseye! Nice!

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Posted : November 3, 2020 6:25 pm
Beth Powers
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Super-duper happy for you, Beth! I know you worked for that one. One ring closer to the bullseye now! Congrats!

Thanks! I was starting to feel like I couldn't get past the HM, but this one is going to give me incentive to figure out what I did and try to do it again in the next story wotf007

Beth Powers
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Silver HM x 5
HM x 20
Entries x 66
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Collected Stories:
Sorcery & Widgets
Runes & Rivets

 
Posted : November 3, 2020 6:28 pm
Henckel
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There are a lot of AWESOME results here! Congratulations to all of you.

Also, to my good friend, Candice, I'm so happy to see you receive your first SHM!

Lastly, I just noticed Beth's stats in her email tag: 52 Entries, 15 HMs, and she's just received her first SHM!!! Oh Beth, that is nothing shy of amazing. I HUGE congratulations to you.
wotf009

WOTF Stats
(2014) V31 – R
(2018) V35 – HM
(2019) V36 – HM, SHM
(2020) V37 – R, HM, SHM, Finalist
(2021) V38 – SF, SHM, SHM, HM
(2022) V39 – HM, SHM, SHM, SHM
(2023) V40 - HM, SF, tba, tba

 
Posted : November 3, 2020 6:29 pm
(@d-kav)
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SHM for me.

 
Posted : November 3, 2020 7:23 pm
(@kakent80)
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HM again. That’s 5 entries and 4 HMs (I got a rejection last time but was expecting it). I honestly don’t think I’m capable of anything more wotf005

Well done to everyone else that placed too!

 
Posted : November 3, 2020 8:50 pm
Dustin Adams
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wotf057
Better than I thought!

Eager to get the critique.
Since my first one, I play a game before submitting: What would Dave write in his critique?
If I find something, I fix it.
So I'm curious here... what did I miss? wotf007

Career:

1x Win
2x NW-F
2x S-F
9x S-HM
11x HM
7x R

 
Posted : November 3, 2020 9:55 pm
N.V. Haskell
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HM for me which is better than I was expecting.
Congrats to all who placed in one way or another and if you got an R, just keep writing.

V37 Q1-R
V37 Q2-HM
V37 Q3-SHM
V37 Q4-HM

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V37- R, HM, SHM, HM
V38- HM, SHM, Winner (3rd place)

 
Posted : November 3, 2020 10:29 pm
Disgruntled Peony
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wotf057

Along with Dustin Adams and Michael Kingswood! That's a good showing.

NGL, I am a little disappointed--I tried really hard to hit all the Finalist buttons with this story because I wanted to meet K.D. and Leah in person. I'll find out where I missed, though, so silver lining?

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R, SF, SHM, SHM, SHM, F, R, HM, SHM, R, HM, R, F, SHM, SHM, SHM, SF, SHM, 1st Place (Q2 V38)
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Posted : November 3, 2020 11:10 pm
(@ccrawford)
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SHM for me again! This was a revision of my previous SHM, so... At least I didn't make it worse? Lol.

Congrats to everyone!!!

v35: Q4 - HM
V36: R, R, R, R
V37: SHM, HM, HM, SHM
V38: SHM, HM, HM, HM
V39: HM, R, SHM, HM
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Short story "Our Kind" published in DreamForge Anvil, Issue #5, and also "One Shot at Aeden" published in DreamForge Anvil, Issue #7!

 
Posted : November 3, 2020 11:28 pm
SwiftPotato
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Whoa, good showing, folks! THREE semi-finalists (so far??), a bunch of silvers and HMs...nice!!! Congrats and commiseration to everyone. The most important thing is that you got some writing down on paper, finished it, and entered - that's more than literal billions of people can say.

R, 3rd place Q4 v36!!!
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Posted : November 3, 2020 11:36 pm
Dragonchef
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Beth Powers! WOW!!! You deserve it after all this time.
Liz an Michael - so excellent!
Congrats to all you SFs.
All the SHMs and HM . . . Way to go! You did the work and now you reap.congrats.
wotf009 wotf010

As for me, sadly, an R. (And I thought it was my best work - weird, huh?)
Crying in my coffee.

Back to work.

3 HMs
6 SHMs
Umpteen Rs
Still hoping and working toward better -
One of these days, Alice . . . POW! We're going to the moon!

 
Posted : November 3, 2020 11:44 pm
RETreasure
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wotf056

Congratulations to everyone!

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Published Finalist Volume 38
Pro’d out Q4V39
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Posted : November 3, 2020 11:49 pm
(@reigheena)
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An honorable mention, which breaks my 5 R streak. *whew*.

This story received a personal rejection 1 day before the deadline, so I submitted it without changes. But now that I've had the chance to ponder, I agree that if I use the skill mentioned in the rejection, it will make the story better. So, off to edit.

v 29 : - HM - - | v 30 : - - - - | v 31 : - - - HM | v 32 : - HM - HM | v 33 : R HM R SHM | v 34 : SHM SHM HM R | v 35 : HM R R R | v 36 : - R R R | v 37 : - - - HM | v 38 : - - - HM | v 39 : HM - - R | v 40: - HM - SHM | v 41: R
My published works

 
Posted : November 4, 2020 12:01 am
(@thomas-woodward)
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HM here. Congrats to everyone who entered! Also huge to congrats our SHMs and SFs!

5x R
10x HM
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"No subject is terrible if the story is true, if the prose is clean and honest, and if it affirms courage and grace under pressure." — Ernest Hemingway

 
Posted : November 4, 2020 12:21 am
slreno
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Breaking out of the R streak with an HM
Congrats to all the participants!

"Truth is stranger than fiction because fiction has to be possible and the truth doesn't." - Mark Twain
13x HM
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Posted : November 4, 2020 12:34 am
Yelena
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I got a but was very hopeful with this one. Still, huge improvement from Q3.

V36:Q3 HM V37: Q3 R, Q4 SHM V38: R,HM, F, HM V39: HM, SHM, SHM, SHM V40: SF, RWC, ?

 
Posted : November 4, 2020 12:36 am
chuckt
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Honorable Mention

I certainly wasn't expecting to wake up to results this morning.

Chuck Thompson
6 Rs, 5 HMs, 2 SHMs

 
Posted : November 4, 2020 12:46 am
Agathon
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We are all to be congratulated! Good work everyone!

My result in Q4 is HM

This is a story I am quite proud of, One of only two comedies I ever tried.

Rschibler critiqued another story I was considering for Q4 and her comments made it clear that the other story wasn't ready yet. So thanks, Rschibler!

Agathon McGeachy
Figure Sculptor, Mechanical Designer, Reformed Rakehell, Writer
Vol 37, Q2: HM
Vol 37, Q3: HM
Vol 37, Q4: HM
Vol 38, Q1: R
Vol 38, Q2: R
Vol 38, Q3: HM
Vol 38, Q4: HM
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Posted : November 4, 2020 12:52 am
chuckt
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I am so proud of you forumites! Look at all the HMs, SHMs and SFs! Wow!!!

Special shout-out to Liz, Becky, and Dustin.

Chuck Thompson
6 Rs, 5 HMs, 2 SHMs

 
Posted : November 4, 2020 12:59 am
(@istanhope)
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Congrats to everyone who participated! I'm so glad to be a part of this.

I got a SHM! I've never entered the contest before, so I had no idea what to expect. This is amazing!

SHM x2
HM x2

 
Posted : November 4, 2020 1:55 am
(@reuben)
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wotf055
Yay, I get to use a special smilie! And Ii feels good to have finally broken in. HUGE congrats to Beth, and anyone else who's leveled up!

Success is going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm ~ Winston Churchill
V37: R, R, R, HM
V38: SHM

 
Posted : November 4, 2020 2:19 am
Valiant
(@valiant)
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Got my second HM. Now I'm taking a break from short-form for NaNoWriMo and then back to working on entries in December =)

37-2: R 37-3: HM 37-4: HM
38-1: F 38-2: --

 
Posted : November 4, 2020 3:47 am
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