I finally finished my story. I had a beginning and an ending, but the middle left me puzzled for weeks. I knew what I wanted to happen, I just couldn't make it happen. Now that it's finished, I'm in the 'change the to a' stage. How do you all shut off the editor and let go?
@sandy If you're confident you've corrected any grammatical or spelling errors, just give it a quick read and only change things that strike you as wrong or awkward. If you read it too closely once you have it substantively there, you're as likely to hurt the work as improve it.
That's my approach, anyway. Or you can just let the clock dictate to you - your choice! And best of luck!
(6) HM, (1) SHM
I finally finished my story. I had a beginning and an ending, but the middle left me puzzled for weeks. I knew what I wanted to happen, I just couldn't make it happen. Now that it's finished, I'm in the 'change the to a' stage. How do you all shut off the editor and let go?
When I get to a point where I'm telling myself, "You know what would really make this sentence pop? A freaking semi-colon, baby. Right there!"
Or I look at a word and spend ten minutes scouring my thesaurus.
Or I move a word up in the sentence, then back again, then no no no...back up again. No, back!
Then it's time to step away and just push the SUBMIT button.
"You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you."
— Ray Bradbury
Drop me a line at https://morganbroadhead.com
SFx1
HMx2
Rx4
@sandy when you get to the point you know you're just moving the deck chairs about, it's done.
R:6 RWC:1 HM:6 SHM:3
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I'm in for Q3. Good luck everyone who has entered or is about to.
WOTF results:
Before Moon's Vol 39 challenge, 6 R's: Vol 31 Q3, Vol 33 Q3, Vol 35, Q4, Vol 37 Q3 and Q4, and Vol 38 Q3.
Vol 39: Q1 RWC, Q2 HM, Q3 HM, Q4 HM
Vol 40: Q1 P, Q2 P
IOTF results:
Vol 39: Q1 HM, Q2 R, Q3 HM, Q4 HM
Vol 40: Q1 P
According to Winston Churchill, "success is going from failure to failure with enthusiasm"
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I'm in for Q3. May the best story be written by forumites, fingers crossed anyway.
Today's science fiction is tomorrow's reality-D.R.Sweeney
HM x5
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I finally finished my story. I had a beginning and an ending, but the middle left me puzzled for weeks. I knew what I wanted to happen, I just couldn't make it happen. Now that it's finished, I'm in the 'change the to a' stage. How do you all shut off the editor and let go?
Mostly, I shut off the editor by moving on to the next new writing.
Write so long as words keep flowing...
http://www.DocHonourBooks.com
2021 FWA RPLA: Fx2
2022 FWA RPLA: 1st
V38 Q3:HM; Q4:HM
V39 Q1:HM; Q2: RWC; Q3: HM; Q4: DQ (oops)
Despite my insistence that I'll wait until the very last minute to submit, I'm now officially IN for Q3!
Ha, Morgan! Got you beat by a day
And now mine is in also. And it occurs to me, Morgan, that we don't really want to create a competition to be last to submit. I can too easily picture waiting until the VERY LAST MINUTE, and then accidentally watching the second hand tick past for a big oops.
Write so long as words keep flowing...
http://www.DocHonourBooks.com
2021 FWA RPLA: Fx2
2022 FWA RPLA: 1st
V38 Q3:HM; Q4:HM
V39 Q1:HM; Q2: RWC; Q3: HM; Q4: DQ (oops)
I'm in for Q3. Good luck to everyone here on the forums!
v37: Q3HM
v38: Q1R, Q2HM, Q3HM
v39: Q2HM, Q3HM, Q4HM
v40: Q1 In Progress
I'm available for critique exchanges via PM. Note: I will not be available for exchanges from 12/17/22-1/1/23.
& I'm in!
I'm proud of this one! It was one of my first submissions to WotF and earned an R. The story had promise. My abilities at the time just weren't up to snuff. I've learned a lot about the craft since and decided to go back and fix it up. Fingers crossed my efforts did the trick!
Many thanks to @ceciblack & @AliciaCay for their thoughtful critiques. You pushed me to craft a much better story.
Good luck, all!
R X 3
HM X 7
SHM X 2
For those finishing up entries, you can do it. But you might want to get back to work.
Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : P, P
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Okay, I'm in for Q3. Phew!
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Composer: Will & Whit The Musical based on Laura Lee Gulledge’s young adult graphic novel, Will & Whit.
v38: HM,--,R,HM
v39: HM,SHM,SHM,F
in with almost 2 hours to spare...a new PR!
good luck everyone.
"Rejections make you a working writer..." -Mur Lafferty
V38: SHM, R
V39: SHM, RWC, HM, HM
I'm in with another last minute submission! Phew. Good luck, everyone!
V37: -, -, R, SHM
V38: R, SHM, HM, HM
V39: SHM, HM, HM, ?
I made it in around quittin' time EST yesterday.
Onward!
Career:
1x 3rd place
2x Finalist
2x Semi
9x Silver
11x HM
7x R
Phwew. Got my story in just under the wire last night. It's a rework of my story from Q1 that got the new rejected with comments category. I sped up the pace a little and got the story moving much sooner from the start. I threw in what I hope is a cool hook. Hopefully that does the trick! I need a nap.
Congratulations to everyone who submitted!
V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Pro’d out Q4V39
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& I'm in!
I'm proud of this one! It was one of my first submissions to WotF and earned an R. The story had promise. My abilities at the time just weren't up to snuff. I've learned a lot about the craft since and decided to go back and fix it up. Fingers crossed my efforts did the trick!
Many thanks to @ceciblack & @AliciaCay for their thoughtful critiques. You pushed me to craft a much better story.
Good luck, all!
You are such a talented writer, John Eric. The absolute best of luck to you!
~a.
V32: HM (Q4)
V33: HM, HM, SHM, HM
V34: R, R, HM, HM
V35: HM, HM, R, HM
V36: R, R, SHM, R
V37: SHM, FINALIST, HM, SHM
V38: SF, X, SHM, SHM
V39: SHM, tbd, tbd
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I submitted to Q3 a few days ago, but forgot to check in here
Beth Powers
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HM x 18
Entries x 61
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I just realized I put the word count on my Q3 submission (top right of the first page). Is that a DQ?
V39/Q2-SHM
V39/Q3-SHM
V39/Q4-RWC
V40/Q1-P
V40/Q2-WIP
@writhmic Standard manuscript format requests word count. Identifying information would be a DQ.
V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Pro’d out Q4V39
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Reviews & Short Stories: www.patreon.com/rebeccaetreasure
Ok phew. Thank you!
V39/Q2-SHM
V39/Q3-SHM
V39/Q4-RWC
V40/Q1-P
V40/Q2-WIP
Now that results from Q2 have been announced, just wanted to get this post back in the spotlight. Hoping to hear results by Thanksgiving!
"You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you."
— Ray Bradbury
Drop me a line at https://morganbroadhead.com
SFx1
HMx2
Rx4
Now that results from Q2 have been announced, just wanted to get this post back in the spotlight. Hoping to hear results by Thanksgiving!
Well it is Thursday tomorrow 🤣
R:6 RWC:1 HM:6 SHM:3
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Sadly, I don't have high hopes for my Q3.
Bowstring drawn, target Silver.
Career:
1x 3rd place
2x Finalist
2x Semi
9x Silver
11x HM
7x R
My Q3 is an odd one for me. I really want it to do well--I think it's one of the better stories I've written and it's very different to most of the rest. But I'm not certain that it's a perfect Contest fit. That being said, it is entirely without any of the big fat no-no details that might get a story disqualified, which is a good thing at least...
I'll just cross my fingers and hope, same as usual. I have a lousy track record at guessing how well any story of mine will perform once it's been entered...
DQ:0 / R:0 / RWC:0 / HM:11 / SHM:6 / SF:1 / F:1
Submitted for Q1.V40 and Q2.V40
Last four: SHM • SHM • SF • HM
Revised SHM ('Ashwright') at PodCastle
It's a wonder I got anything in for Q3 at all so at least no twitching for me when results are near at hand for this quarter.
V36:Q3 HM V37: Q3 R, Q4 SHM V38: R,HM, F, HM V39: HM, SHM, SHM,