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(@sandy)
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I finally finished my story. I had a beginning and an ending, but the middle left me puzzled for weeks. I knew what I wanted to happen, I just couldn't make it happen. Now that it's finished, I'm in the 'change the to a' stage. How do you all shut off the editor and let go?

 
Posted : June 30, 2022 7:33 am
 Dom
(@dommichaels)
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@sandy If you're confident you've corrected any grammatical or spelling errors, just give it a quick read and only change things that strike you as wrong or awkward. If you read it too closely once you have it substantively there, you're as likely to hurt the work as improve it. 

That's my approach, anyway. Or you can just let the clock dictate to you - your choice! And best of luck!

(6) HM, (1) SHM

 
Posted : June 30, 2022 8:26 am
(@morgan-broadhead)
Posts: 321
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Posted by: @sandy

I finally finished my story. I had a beginning and an ending, but the middle left me puzzled for weeks. I knew what I wanted to happen, I just couldn't make it happen. Now that it's finished, I'm in the 'change the to a' stage. How do you all shut off the editor and let go?

When I get to a point where I'm telling myself, "You know what would really make this sentence pop? A freaking semi-colon, baby. Right there!"

Or I look at a word and spend ten minutes scouring my thesaurus.

Or I move a word up in the sentence, then back again, then no no no...back up again. No, back!

Then it's time to step away and just push the SUBMIT button.

"You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you."
— Ray Bradbury
Drop me a line at https://morganbroadhead.com
SFx1
HMx2
Rx4

 
Posted : June 30, 2022 8:37 am
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pdblake
(@pdblake)
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@sandy when you get to the point you know you're just moving the deck chairs about, it's done. 

R:6 RWC:1 HM:6 SHM:3
My Blog

 
Posted : June 30, 2022 8:56 am
Physa/ Guthington/ Amy
(@physa)
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I'm in for Q3. Good luck everyone who has entered or is about to. 

WOTF results:
Before Moon's Vol 39 challenge, 6 R's: Vol 31 Q3, Vol 33 Q3, Vol 35, Q4, Vol 37 Q3 and Q4, and Vol 38 Q3.
Vol 39: Q1 RWC, Q2 HM, Q3 HM, Q4 HM
Vol 40: Q1 P, Q2 P
IOTF results:
Vol 39: Q1 HM, Q2 R, Q3 HM, Q4 HM
Vol 40: Q1 P
According to Winston Churchill, "success is going from failure to failure with enthusiasm"
Somehow I lost my Guthington profile, but it's me. Amy Wethington = Guthington = Physa

 
Posted : June 30, 2022 9:17 am
storysinger
(@storysinger)
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I'm in for Q3. May the best story be written by forumites, fistinair fingers crossed anyway.

Today's science fiction is tomorrow's reality-D.R.Sweeney
HM x5
Published Poetry
2012 Stars in Our Hearts
Silver Ships

 
Posted : June 30, 2022 10:09 am
Doc Honour
(@ehonour)
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Posted by: @sandy

I finally finished my story. I had a beginning and an ending, but the middle left me puzzled for weeks. I knew what I wanted to happen, I just couldn't make it happen. Now that it's finished, I'm in the 'change the to a' stage. How do you all shut off the editor and let go?

Mostly, I shut off the editor by moving on to the next new writing.

Write so long as words keep flowing...
http://www.DocHonourBooks.com
2021 FWA RPLA: Fx2
2022 FWA RPLA: 1st
V38 Q3:HM; Q4:HM
V39 Q1:HM; Q2: RWC; Q3: HM; Q4: DQ (oops)

 
Posted : June 30, 2022 10:24 am
Doc Honour
(@ehonour)
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Posted by: @ehonour
Posted by: @morgan-broadhead

Despite my insistence that I'll wait until the very last minute to submit, I'm now officially IN for Q3!

Ha, Morgan! Got you beat by a day

And now mine is in also. And it occurs to me, Morgan, that we don't really want to create a competition to be last to submit. I can too easily picture waiting until the VERY LAST MINUTE, and then accidentally watching the second hand tick past for a big oops.

Shocked  

Write so long as words keep flowing...
http://www.DocHonourBooks.com
2021 FWA RPLA: Fx2
2022 FWA RPLA: 1st
V38 Q3:HM; Q4:HM
V39 Q1:HM; Q2: RWC; Q3: HM; Q4: DQ (oops)

 
Posted : June 30, 2022 11:06 am
(@ajschultz6)
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I'm in for Q3. Good luck to everyone here on the forums!

v37: Q3HM
v38: Q1R, Q2HM, Q3HM
v39: Q2HM, Q3HM, Q4HM
v40: Q1 In Progress
I'm available for critique exchanges via PM. Note: I will not be available for exchanges from 12/17/22-1/1/23.

 
Posted : June 30, 2022 12:31 pm
MountainSpud
(@jeschleicher)
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& I'm in!

I'm proud of this one! It was one of my first submissions to WotF and earned an R. The story had promise. My abilities at the time just weren't up to snuff. I've learned a lot about the craft since and decided to go back and fix it up. Fingers crossed my efforts did the trick!

Many thanks to @ceciblack & @AliciaCay for their thoughtful critiques. You pushed me to craft a much better story.

Good luck, all!

R X 3
HM X 7
SHM X 2

 
Posted : June 30, 2022 12:36 pm
Cray Dimensional
(@craydimensional)
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For those finishing up entries, you can do it. But you might want to get back to work. laughing  

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : P, P
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
Forthcoming “Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : June 30, 2022 2:32 pm
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CeciBlack
(@ceciblack)
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Okay, I'm in for Q3. Phew!

Ceci Black
Writer, Musician
Free Album: Captains of Industry (vocals, lyrics, keys & occasional bass)
Composer: Will & Whit The Musical based on Laura Lee Gulledge’s young adult graphic novel, Will & Whit.
v38: HM,--,R,HM
v39: HM,SHM,SHM,F

 
Posted : June 30, 2022 5:13 pm
LeaW
 LeaW
(@leaw)
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in with almost 2 hours to spare...a new PR!

good luck everyone. 

"Rejections make you a working writer..." -Mur Lafferty
V38: SHM, R
V39: SHM, RWC, HM, HM

 
Posted : June 30, 2022 10:16 pm
pdblake
(@pdblake)
Posts: 365
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So, did everyone make it?

R:6 RWC:1 HM:6 SHM:3
My Blog

 
Posted : June 30, 2022 11:32 pm
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PenMark
(@penmark)
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I'm in with another last minute submission! Phew. Good luck, everyone!

V37: -, -, R, SHM
V38: R, SHM, HM, HM
V39: SHM, HM, HM, ?

 
Posted : July 1, 2022 12:04 am
Dustin Adams
(@tj_knight)
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I made it in around quittin' time EST yesterday.

Onward! fistinair  

Career:

1x 3rd place
2x Finalist
2x Semi
9x Silver
11x HM
7x R

 
Posted : July 1, 2022 2:42 am
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Jered Fitzgerald
(@fitz)
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Phwew. Got my story in just under the wire last night.  It's a rework of my story from Q1 that got the new rejected with comments category. I sped up the pace a little and got the story moving much sooner from the start. I threw in what I hope is a cool hook. Hopefully that does the trick! I need a nap.

 
Posted : July 1, 2022 7:58 am
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
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Congratulations to everyone who submitted!

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Pro’d out Q4V39
Always Available for 5-page Critiques
CV & Editing Services: www.rebeccaetreasure.com
Reviews & Short Stories: www.patreon.com/rebeccaetreasure

 
Posted : July 1, 2022 8:01 am
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AliciaCay
(@aliciacay)
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Posted by: @jeschleicher

& I'm in!

I'm proud of this one! It was one of my first submissions to WotF and earned an R. The story had promise. My abilities at the time just weren't up to snuff. I've learned a lot about the craft since and decided to go back and fix it up. Fingers crossed my efforts did the trick!

Many thanks to @ceciblack & @AliciaCay for their thoughtful critiques. You pushed me to craft a much better story.

Good luck, all!

@jeschleicher 

You are such a talented writer, John Eric. The absolute best of luck to you!  Smile

~a.

V32: HM (Q4)
V33: HM, HM, SHM, HM
V34: R, R, HM, HM
V35: HM, HM, R, HM
V36: R, R, SHM, R
V37: SHM, FINALIST, HM, SHM
V38: SF, X, SHM, SHM
V39: SHM, tbd, tbd
https://aliciacay.com

 
Posted : July 1, 2022 10:48 am
Beth Powers
(@bethpowers)
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I submitted to Q3 a few days ago, but forgot to check in here grinning  

Beth Powers
-----
Silver HM x 5
HM x 18
Entries x 61
-----
Collected Stories: Sorcery & Widgets

 
Posted : July 1, 2022 1:29 pm
Writhmic
(@writhmic)
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I just realized I put the word count on my Q3 submission (top right of the first page). Is that a DQ?

V39/Q2-SHM
V39/Q3-SHM
V39/Q4-RWC
V40/Q1-P
V40/Q2-WIP

 
Posted : July 4, 2022 9:46 am
pdblake
(@pdblake)
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@writhmic

 

My last two SHMs had the word count on. 

R:6 RWC:1 HM:6 SHM:3
My Blog

 
Posted : July 4, 2022 9:57 am
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RETreasure
(@rschibler)
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@writhmic Standard manuscript format requests word count. Identifying information would be a DQ.

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Pro’d out Q4V39
Always Available for 5-page Critiques
CV & Editing Services: www.rebeccaetreasure.com
Reviews & Short Stories: www.patreon.com/rebeccaetreasure

 
Posted : July 4, 2022 10:10 am
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Jason Toth
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Posted by: @writhmic

I just realized I put the word count on my Q3 submission (top right of the first page). Is that a DQ?

Hello, word count on the manuscript is not a problem, in fact it is good to have this. Good luck with your story!

 

 
Posted : July 4, 2022 10:13 am
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Writhmic
(@writhmic)
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Ok phew. Thank you!

V39/Q2-SHM
V39/Q3-SHM
V39/Q4-RWC
V40/Q1-P
V40/Q2-WIP

 
Posted : July 4, 2022 10:30 am
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(@morgan-broadhead)
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Now that results from Q2 have been announced, just wanted to get this post back in the spotlight. Hoping to hear results by Thanksgiving!

"You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you."
— Ray Bradbury
Drop me a line at https://morganbroadhead.com
SFx1
HMx2
Rx4

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 11:49 am
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pdblake
(@pdblake)
Posts: 365
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Posted by: @morgan-broadhead

Now that results from Q2 have been announced, just wanted to get this post back in the spotlight. Hoping to hear results by Thanksgiving!

Well it is Thursday tomorrow 🤣

R:6 RWC:1 HM:6 SHM:3
My Blog

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 1:02 pm
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Dustin Adams
(@tj_knight)
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Sadly, I don't have high hopes for my Q3.

Bowstring drawn, target Silver.

Career:

1x 3rd place
2x Finalist
2x Semi
9x Silver
11x HM
7x R

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 1:51 pm
DoctorJest
(@doctorjest)
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My Q3 is an odd one for me. I really want it to do well--I think it's one of the better stories I've written and it's very different to most of the rest. But I'm not certain that it's a perfect Contest fit. That being said, it is entirely without any of the big fat no-no details that might get a story disqualified, which is a good thing at least...

I'll just cross my fingers and hope, same as usual. I have a lousy track record at guessing how well any story of mine will perform once it's been entered...

DQ:0 / R:0 / RWC:0 / HM:11 / SHM:6 / SF:1 / F:1
Submitted for Q1.V40 and Q2.V40
Last four: SHM • SHM • SF • HM
Revised SHM ('Ashwright') at PodCastle

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 4:00 pm
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Yelena
(@scribblesatdusk)
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It's a wonder I got anything in for Q3 at all so at least no twitching for me when results are near at hand for this quarter.

V36:Q3 HM V37: Q3 R, Q4 SHM V38: R,HM, F, HM V39: HM, SHM, SHM,

 
Posted : August 10, 2022 4:52 pm
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