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I was pretty excited about my Q2, I tried a new technique for flashbacks suggested by an editor on twitter and man it smoothed out those transitions. Prose wise it may be my best work, but when I read through it last night I realized the spec is pretty weak out the gate, it's strong in the end but in the first five you don't see a lot. Oh well, that's the point of the comp to learn and grow...and to go back and forth between confidence and self-doubt 🤣.

Enough dwelling, I have so many ideas for Q3 now. Are there beta reader groups in this thread? My mom is my beta reader and she's not gentle on me but I want new voices haha.

V39 - Q2 HM, Q3 SHM, Q4 HM
V40 - Q1 SHM, Q2 HM. Q3 SHM Q4 Last minute rewrite panic

 
Posted : April 12, 2023 6:20 am
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Posted by: @watt_writes

and to go back and forth between confidence and self-doubt 🤣.

Heard that!

 

V39:HM
V40:SHM, HM, SHM, P
Stories published in 72 Hours of Insanity, Touchstones, and Warp & Weave.
Stories forthcoming in the Murderbugs anthology and Neo-opsis Science Fiction Magazine.

 
Posted : April 12, 2023 6:55 am
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Posted by: @watt_writes

Are there beta reader groups in this thread?

Post in the crit exchange thread, & you'll get folks quick to swap stories. I'd also be happy to beta whenever. 

V40: Q1 3rd Place Winner
V39: SHM, HM, HM, HM
V38: HM, SHM, HM, HM
V37: R, R, HM, HM
V36: R

 
Posted : April 12, 2023 7:15 am
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@jeschleicher Oh great! thank you!!

V39 - Q2 HM, Q3 SHM, Q4 HM
V40 - Q1 SHM, Q2 HM. Q3 SHM Q4 Last minute rewrite panic

 
Posted : April 13, 2023 7:50 am
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@physa, any smoke signals yet? Beginning to vibrate with anxiety.

waiting   (except less grumpy. Much less.)

 

VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com

 
Posted : May 31, 2023 1:26 pm
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The last few years dates for Quarter 2  results are:

June 26, July 22, July 14, June 25 and August 9. I would take that August date as an outlier.

Unless we get word of anything, I expect mid June at the earliest.

V35: R, R, R
V36: R, HM, R, HM
V37: HM, R, SF, HM
V38: HM, HM, HM, SHM
V39: HM, HM, SHM, RWC
V40: HM, SHM, HM, ?
"The Soul of Trees" published in Third Flatiron's Things With Feathers: Stories of Hope

 
Posted : May 31, 2023 1:38 pm
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Posted by: @ajzach

The last few years dates for Quarter 2  results are:

June 26, July 22, July 14, June 25 and August 9. I would take that August date as an outlier.

Unless we get word of anything, I expect mid June at the earliest.

Yep no news until end June at best

 

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : HM, RWC, R, P
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
Forthcoming “Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : May 31, 2023 6:23 pm
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Posted by: @ease

@physa, any smoke signals yet? Beginning to vibrate with anxiety.

waiting   (except less grumpy. Much less.)

 

[consults scrying device]

[so many variables detected]

[the possibility of alternate realities looms]

[what with the extra first readers]

[scratches head, this can't be right]

[can it?]

[gazes across the meadow]

[begins to set up tents]

[can't hurt to be ready for bear]

[a watchtower rotation sign-up roster is placed on the bulletin board]

[best guess is smoke signals will be detected in late June]

[but who knows?]

[could be earlier, could be later]

[begins to order supplies for an extended wait]

 

WOTF results:
Before Moon's Vol 39 challenge, 6 R's: Vol 31 Q3, Vol 33 Q3, Vol 35, Q4, Vol 37 Q3 and Q4, and Vol 38 Q3.
Vol 39: Q1 RWC, Q2 HM, Q3 HM, Q4 HM
Vol 40: Q1 RWC, Q2 HM, Q3 RWC
IOTF results:
Vol 39: Q1 HM, Q2 R, Q3 HM, Q4 HM
Vol 40: Q1 R, Q4 P
According to Winston Churchill, "success is going from failure to failure with enthusiasm"
Somehow I lost my Guthington profile, but it's me. Amy Wethington = Guthington = Physa

 
Posted : June 1, 2023 5:33 am
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With an end-of-June birthday, I'm here hoping I get better news than just "you're getting old" this year! giggle  

Rooting for all the forumites!

 

VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com

 
Posted : June 1, 2023 12:53 pm
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I keep repeating 'It's not twitching time, It's not twitching time," but I here I sit under the twitching blanket.

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : HM, RWC, R, P
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
Forthcoming “Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : June 3, 2023 5:40 pm
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Well Cray. I personally think it's twitching time. Excitement  

Today's science fiction is tomorrow's reality-D.R.Sweeney
HM x5
Published Poetry
2012 Stars in Our Hearts
Silver Ships
Ist forumite to join the Wulfpack

 
Posted : June 4, 2023 6:49 am
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I have high hopes for my Q2 story. Phone charged and fingers crossed.   waiting  

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford

2023 - V40 - Q1-HM, Q2-HM, Q3-R, Q4-Ideas Brewing
2022 - V39 - Q1-SHM, Q2-HM, Q3-SF, Q4-HM
2021 - V38 - Q4-HM
2020 - V37 - Q2-R

 
Posted : June 4, 2023 7:16 am
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I really think my Q2 submission is the best story I've written so far. I'm really hoping it's good enough for an HM.

After 139 rejections and 0 acceptances for my other 8 stories I need some validation that I'm not wasting my time. 

rejection

V32: Q3 - Rejected
V33: Q3 - Rejected
V39: Q4 - RWC
V40: Q1 - RWC
V40: Q2 - Rejected
V40: Q3 - HM
V40: Q4 - *revising*

 
Posted : June 4, 2023 8:58 am
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Posted by: @pmg

I really think my Q2 submission is the best story I've written so far.

Good luck on the story. Glad to read you haven't let the rejections stop you from writing. Many people let it get to them and stop. I've fallen into that trap for many years and I didn't pick writing up seriously until late 2021.

PM me when you get the results, regardless what they are.  I'm not a great test reader, but maybe I can see something that you being so close to the story can't see. I know having someone else read my stuff has helped me identify weak parts of my story. I've learned that by fixing a weakness in one story, I've realized how my other stories are weak in a similar way.  

 

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford

2023 - V40 - Q1-HM, Q2-HM, Q3-R, Q4-Ideas Brewing
2022 - V39 - Q1-SHM, Q2-HM, Q3-SF, Q4-HM
2021 - V38 - Q4-HM
2020 - V37 - Q2-R

 
Posted : June 4, 2023 12:18 pm
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@pmg Feel free to Private Message me your latest story. I'm no pro writer but I've got a pretty solid idea about how to rise from R to HM.

VOL 40 2nd Quarter: Third Place ("Ashes to Ashes, Blood to Carbonfiber")
Past submissions: R - HM - HM - HM - HM - HM - SHM - SHM
www.jd-writes.com

 
Posted : June 4, 2023 12:34 pm
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@toddjones Hi, yeah I basically stopped writing between 2016 and 2019 due to a bunch of R's. Stephen King's "On Writing" helped me to understand that it's quite typical for short story writers to accumulate a lot of R's. Sure, thanks, I'll let you know how my Q2 gets on.

V32: Q3 - Rejected
V33: Q3 - Rejected
V39: Q4 - RWC
V40: Q1 - RWC
V40: Q2 - Rejected
V40: Q3 - HM
V40: Q4 - *revising*

 
Posted : June 5, 2023 1:45 am
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@pmg I (and I suspect the majority on this forum and writers generally), share your self-doubt and worry whether to keep going. I received a SHM from WotF after many form rejections, and it spurred me to continue because--while a SHM is not a published work--it was external validation that I could write something more than decent. The great thing with WotF and this forum, is it gives you some yard stick to measures your work (and progress) against. Few writers get accepted straight out the gate (Stephen King's rejection slip nailed to the wall, for example). We've got to write our way through a million terrible words, find our  voice and our style, and persevere. Easier said than done, but there's a lot of supportive people here. I'm happy to take a look at your Q2 and give you my thoughts - feel free to PM me.

R: 2 / HM: 4 / SHM: 2
Published stories:
"Drunk Scentless" - Daily Science Fiction (June 2021)
"Interview with the Vampire Hunter" - Every Day Fiction (October 2021)
"Dutch Courage" - 365tomorrows (August 2022)

 
Posted : June 5, 2023 1:57 am
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Posted by: @pmg

After 139 rejections and 0 acceptances for my other 8 stories I need some validation that I'm not wasting my time.

The fact that you are still striving to persevere and active on the forum is your validation. Hard work and dedication will take you many steps up the ladder of success.

Today's science fiction is tomorrow's reality-D.R.Sweeney
HM x5
Published Poetry
2012 Stars in Our Hearts
Silver Ships
Ist forumite to join the Wulfpack

 
Posted : June 5, 2023 5:36 am
Preston Dennett
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Posted by: @pmg

I really think my Q2 submission is the best story I've written so far. I'm really hoping it's good enough for an HM.

After 139 rejections and 0 acceptances for my other 8 stories I need some validation that I'm not wasting my time. 

rejection

Just keep at it. I wrote 40 plus stories before I got my first acceptance, and that's not unusual from what I've read. Don't give up! Read, write, submit, repeat.

 

Preston Dennett
HM x 12
F x 1
Winner, 2nd place, Q1, Volume 35
40 stories published! (and counting!)

 
Posted : June 5, 2023 7:04 am
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Posted by: @pmg

I really think my Q2 submission is the best story I've written so far. I'm really hoping it's good enough for an HM.

After 139 rejections and 0 acceptances for my other 8 stories I need some validation that I'm not wasting my time. 

Brandon Sanderson gave a keynote about being stuck in the rejection trenches. ( https://youtu.be/oH9sJrAVeC0 ). I found the mindset of consider what you would do if you never got published to be helpful, because I find writing to be such a help for me and my mental state, that I would do it even if I never saw results. 

139 is a good number to start. But it certainly isn't an outlier. Here's my numbers from the past 10 years. 

2014 - 6 rejections, 1 acceptance (no payment)
2015 - 10 rejections, 1 acceptance (no payment)
2016 - 26 rejections, 2 acceptances (token payment)
2017 - 33 rejections, 1 acceptance (no payment)
2018 - 32 rejections, 0 acceptances
2019 - 17 rejections, 1 acceptance (semi-pro) pared back on everything, because I was depressed and dealing with med side effects
2020 - 12 rejections (1 r&r, 1 final round, 1 very detailed personal), 1 acceptance (no payment)
2021 - 27 rejections, 1 acceptance (no payment)
2022 - 25 rejections, 2 reprints (SFWA qualifying venue!)
2023 so far - 9 rejections, 1 acceptance (semi-pro)

What can I say? This is a slog. All you can do is work on improving your craft and keep moving forward. 

 

v 29 : - HM - - | v 30 : - - - - | v 31 : - - - HM | v 32 : - HM - HM | v 33 : R HM R SHM | v 34 : SHM SHM HM R | v 35 : HM R R R | v 36 : - R R R | v 37 : - - - HM | v 38 : - - - HM | v 39 : HM - - R | v 40: - HM -
My published works

 
Posted : June 5, 2023 9:43 am
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@reigheena

Lately I've been complimented on my perseverance in submitting to WotF 32 times. You subbed 33 times in one year! That's persistence. (Salute)

I'm submission hesitant, so I see your list and I'm awestruck. You're braver than I, and will eventually (if not already) have more published than I because those publications will keep adding up!

Career:

1x Win
2x NW-F
2x S-F
9x S-HM
11x HM
7x R

 
Posted : June 5, 2023 11:53 am
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@tj_knight *blush* Before 2019, I had a goal to get a certain number of rejections during the year, since you can't get published without getting rejected. It was a good way to get in the habit of always having a story out on submission, and being able to shrug them off. However, when my depression hit, the rejections just accelerated the downward spiral, and haven't had a rejection goal since. I might consider one in the future, but I also haven't been writing as many short stories to submit (currently working on a novel).

v 29 : - HM - - | v 30 : - - - - | v 31 : - - - HM | v 32 : - HM - HM | v 33 : R HM R SHM | v 34 : SHM SHM HM R | v 35 : HM R R R | v 36 : - R R R | v 37 : - - - HM | v 38 : - - - HM | v 39 : HM - - R | v 40: - HM -
My published works

 
Posted : June 6, 2023 2:57 pm
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I'm back from a short holiday now (my wife's friend's wedding) and proper access to the web. The hotel Wi-Fi wouldn't let me know access the WoTF Forum for some reason. The time away was a good opportunity to clear my head.

@toddjones @ease @joel-c-scoberg @storysinger @prestondennett @reigheena

 I wanted to thank everyone for their supportive comments and offerings of assistance. I greatly appreciate your kindness grinning  

I think if I'd have known how much struggle there is for a lot of writers when I was younger, I'd have continued writing instead of stopping for long periods when I got my first bunch of rejections.

Simply knowing that large rejection numbers is pretty standard has been helpful in maintaining motivation.

 

V32: Q3 - Rejected
V33: Q3 - Rejected
V39: Q4 - RWC
V40: Q1 - RWC
V40: Q2 - Rejected
V40: Q3 - HM
V40: Q4 - *revising*

 
Posted : June 11, 2023 9:51 am
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Cray Dimensional
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Fingers crossed 🤞 that results come back in June instead of July.

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : HM, RWC, R, P
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
Forthcoming “Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : June 11, 2023 12:22 pm
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@craydimensional Shhhhhhhh. I'd like the results to kindly wait until my Q3 is in. I'm currently drowning at my job, and put in my resignation because it's too much of a nightmare factory. I'll have from the 22nd to the 31st to get my Q3 done 🤪. My fragile heart needs to stay motivated.

V39 - Q2 HM, Q3 SHM, Q4 HM
V40 - Q1 SHM, Q2 HM. Q3 SHM Q4 Last minute rewrite panic

 
Posted : June 11, 2023 1:58 pm
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@gideonpsmith Awesome! I wish the best for you this quarter Smile

“Stories are the collective wisdom of everyone who has ever lived. Your job as a storyteller is not simply to entertain. Nor is it to be noticed for the way your turn a phrase. You have a very important job—one of the most important. Your job is to let people know that everyone shares their feelings—and that these feelings bind us. Your job is a healing art, and like all healers, you have a responsibility. Let people know they are not alone. You must make people understand that we are all the same.”
Brian McDonald
2022: Second Place Winner V39 Q1
2021: HM, HM, SHM
2020: R
2019: SHM, R
2018: HM
2017: HM

 
Posted : June 11, 2023 6:06 pm
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@reigheena Those are some incredible submission numbers, good work on keeping it going. It is certainly a slog, but as you said, writing is just good for us. I also saw similar talks from other writers, and I have the same mindset. Even if nothing I write gets published, it was still worth doing, because it is good for me in so many ways. Especially in my early 20s, writing really saved me. Cheers!

“Stories are the collective wisdom of everyone who has ever lived. Your job as a storyteller is not simply to entertain. Nor is it to be noticed for the way your turn a phrase. You have a very important job—one of the most important. Your job is to let people know that everyone shares their feelings—and that these feelings bind us. Your job is a healing art, and like all healers, you have a responsibility. Let people know they are not alone. You must make people understand that we are all the same.”
Brian McDonald
2022: Second Place Winner V39 Q1
2021: HM, HM, SHM
2020: R
2019: SHM, R
2018: HM
2017: HM

 
Posted : June 11, 2023 6:09 pm
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Posted by: @watt_writes

 I'm currently drowning at my job, and put in my resignation because it's too much of a nightmare factory. I'll have from the 22nd to the 31st to get my Q3 done 🤪. My fragile heart needs to stay motivated.

 

Hang in there.  Maybe you can turn the nightmare of work into a story?

 

"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford

2023 - V40 - Q1-HM, Q2-HM, Q3-R, Q4-Ideas Brewing
2022 - V39 - Q1-SHM, Q2-HM, Q3-SF, Q4-HM
2021 - V38 - Q4-HM
2020 - V37 - Q2-R

 
Posted : June 11, 2023 6:27 pm
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Posted by: @watt_writes

@craydimensional Shhhhhhhh. I'd like the results to kindly wait until my Q3 is in. I'm currently drowning at my job, and put in my resignation because it's too much of a nightmare factory. I'll have from the 22nd to the 31st to get my Q3 done 🤪. My fragile heart needs to stay motivated.

So sorry your job has been a nightmare. I have been there and know how it feels. Hang in there.

 

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : HM, RWC, R, P
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
Forthcoming “Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : June 11, 2023 6:30 pm
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@spencer_s I hear you. Writing has been a release from a number of challenges I faced in life. Some times it’s an outlet to escape, and sometimes I use it to work through current events. Either way it is my way of coping so I continue.

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, R, HM, HM
V39: RWC, HM, HM, SHM
V40 : HM, RWC, R, P
"Amore For Life" in After the Gold Rush Third Flatiron Anthology
Forthcoming “Freedom’s Song” in Troubadour and Space Princesses LTUE Anthology

 
Posted : June 11, 2023 6:38 pm
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