Story for exchange - fantasy <4000 words
I'm not really looking for a full blown critique. More like your reaction to the piece. But any helpful comments are cool.
I will still try to critique your work to the extent that you want. PM if interested
I don’t have anything I need critiqued, but I will critique your story if you want.
Not sure how this is done, critiqued online or critiqued by e-mail. Anyway, here is my e-mail address
Benjamin, If you click on "Jellyman" name you can see where you can send him a "private message" and then he will get an email notifying him your interested.
Also I would click on your post above and remove your email address before the spammers get a hold of it.
I hope that helps answer some of your questions. If you have any other questions, just post a reply and someone will get them answered for you.