Story critique exchange round 2
Okay, got some great feedback on my Q1 story so far. Now I need one or two more readers to look over my latest version. Comes in at around 12k words. As always I'm willing to trade for any length, even multiple stories. PM me if interested.
3 x SHM
10 x HM
"Dwell on the beauty of life. Watch the stars, and see yourself running with them." -Marcus Aurelius