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Story Critique Exchange (10000w)

 
Scott_M_Sands
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Hi all,

is anyone available for a critique? I have a story, about 10000w that I'd love some fresh eyes on. 

More than happy to do a swap, if you like.    smiley     

"Many people will tell you that you can't write. Let no one say that you don't." -Ken Rand
V36-37: R x6
V38: R, HM, P

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Topic starter Posted : July 18, 2021 6:24 pm
czing
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Did you get anyone on this one? If you aren't in a super big hurry for it I can look at it. My crit style is a lot about giving my reactions and letting you know if you're making me promises etc. I'm definitely not your person if you are looking for some to spot your punctuation errors Smile

Message me if you are still looking for eyes on this.

v36 Q1, Q3 - HM; Q4 - R
v37 Q1 - R; Q2 - SHM; Q4 - HM
v38 Q1 - HM; Q2 -SHM; Q3 - P

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Posted : August 26, 2021 5:49 pm
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Scott_M_Sands
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@czing 

I actually completely re-did this one over the last little bit (the 10000w had a few flaws...), now from a much more simplistic perspective.

The story v2 is around 5500w. It's almost done. I'll pm you when I finish it, if you're still happy to have a look. Thank you for your response, either way!

"Many people will tell you that you can't write. Let no one say that you don't." -Ken Rand
V36-37: R x6
V38: R, HM, P

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Topic starter Posted : August 27, 2021 6:18 am
Wulf Moon
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Posted : August 27, 2021 10:34 am
czing
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Sounds good - will watch for your message.

v36 Q1, Q3 - HM; Q4 - R
v37 Q1 - R; Q2 - SHM; Q4 - HM
v38 Q1 - HM; Q2 -SHM; Q3 - P

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Posted : August 27, 2021 11:28 am
Scott_M_Sands
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I'll PM you now, czing!

"Many people will tell you that you can't write. Let no one say that you don't." -Ken Rand
V36-37: R x6
V38: R, HM, P

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Topic starter Posted : September 4, 2021 6:05 am
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Joel C. Scoberg
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Hi Scott

Are you still looking for a critique?

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Posted : September 9, 2021 12:25 am
Scott_M_Sands
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@joel-c-scoberg 
Probably not for this one. 
Thanks, though! I appreciate the interest.

 

"Many people will tell you that you can't write. Let no one say that you don't." -Ken Rand
V36-37: R x6
V38: R, HM, P

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Topic starter Posted : September 10, 2021 5:06 am
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