I received a very valid critique that my story is severely lacking in its opening and I've reworked it to hopefully be more compelling. If anyone would mind taking a look, I'd be happy to offer a critique in exchange, though I'm still quite inexperienced, so keep that in mind!
I'm tight on time, but can take a look at your opening if you like--just throw me a PM.
DQ: 0 / R: 0 / RWC: 0 / HM: 10 / SHM: 6 / SF: 0 / F: 1
In for Q3.V39 and Q4.V39
Last four: HM • HM • SHM • SHM
Revised SHM ('Ashwright') at PodCastle
@twdad, I'll take a gander if you PM it to me. Don't mind on format, so long as it's not an Apple-only thing (if that exists?). I'll at least take a look at the opening, and if it's not crazy long I'll probably check it all out.
R - HM - HM - HM - HM - P
Sent you a PM!
v38: Q1R, Q2HM, Q3HM
v39: Q2HM, Q3P, Q4 In Progress
I'm available for critique exchanges via PM.