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twdad
(@twdad)
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I received a very valid critique that my story is severely lacking in its opening and I've reworked it to hopefully be more compelling. If anyone would mind taking a look, I'd be happy to offer a critique in exchange, though I'm still quite inexperienced, so keep that in mind! Smile

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Topic starter Posted : December 27, 2021 8:05 pm
DoctorJest
(@doctorjest)
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I'm tight on time, but can take a look at your opening if you like--just throw me a PM.

R: 0 / HM: 10 / SHM: 4 / SF: 0 / F: 1
Entered for Q1.V39 / Q2.V39 draft zero ~85%
Last result: HM for Q4.V38
Revised SHM ('Ashwright') at PodCastle

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Posted : December 28, 2021 9:45 am
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 Ease
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@twdad, I'll take a gander if you PM it to me. Don't mind on format, so long as it's not an Apple-only thing (if that exists?). I'll at least take a look at the opening, and if it's not crazy long I'll probably check it all out.

R - HM - HM

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Posted : January 7, 2022 8:34 am
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ajschultz6
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Sent you a PM!

v37: X, X, HM, X
v38: R, HM, HM, X
I’m available for critique exchanges of any length - just shoot me a PM.

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Posted : January 8, 2022 9:07 am
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