Seeking Critique for Q3 Opening
I'm looking for someone to take a look at my first couple of pages for my Q3 entry, roughly ~1000 words, and provide some feedback. Basically, I'm trying to see if I need to tighten things up, or increase the pace of the story. I'd be willing to look at your work in return.
"Trust is like a shop. Difficult to build, but surprisingly easy to ruin. But when it is strong and true, there are few things in this world that make you feel stronger."
HM - V37/Q4, V38/Q4, V39/Q1
SHM - V38/Q3
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"Whether you think you can, or you think you can't--you're right."~ Henry Ford
2023 - V40 - Q1-Weaving Tale
2022 - V39 - Q1-SHM, Q2-HM, Q3-SF, Q4-HM
2021 - V38 - Q4-HM
2020 - V37 - Q2-R