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Q1 Story Critique Request

 
Matthew Chambers
(@hyperion88)
New Member
Posts: 4

Hello! I'm looking for reader feedback!

Several people have looked at this story at this point, but I'm looking for another pair of eyes on it. I'd kindly do the same for you if interested. The story is just under 5,000 words. If you're interested, send me an email at Auctor.maximus@gmail.com or a private message - also I know it's a busy time of year with the Holidays, so I appreciate any time people can give me and I look forward to reading your work!

R: 0 / HM: 1 / SHM: 2/ SF: 0 / F: 1

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Topic starter Posted : December 21, 2021 3:14 pm
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
Gold Member
Posts: 819

If you would like me to look at the first five pages I’d be happy to do a deep dive on them. DM me if you’re interested 

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: P
Always Available for 5-page Critiques
www.rebeccaetreasure.com

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Posted : December 24, 2021 3:44 pm
TimE
 TimE
(@time)
Silver Member
Posts: 355

I haven't got past SHM, so not sure if i can help. But i'll give it a try,

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Posted : December 25, 2021 3:23 am
Matthew Chambers
(@hyperion88)
New Member
Posts: 4

@time Any feedback is good! I'll DM you.

R: 0 / HM: 1 / SHM: 2/ SF: 0 / F: 1

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Topic starter Posted : December 25, 2021 10:27 am
cxloi
(@cxloi)
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Posts: 3

Sent you a message

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Posted : January 6, 2022 1:31 am
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