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Need a critique for my WOTF story

 
Temidayo
(@temidayo)
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I am new on this platform. So I am looking for someone to take a look at my story. It is about 6000 words long.

Here is my email : brainiedude@gmail.com

I will really appreciate helping hands. Thanks.

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Topic starter Posted : June 1, 2020 12:16 pm
Rey Nichols
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Posts: 56

I'll take a look at it, send me a PM. Smile

HM: 5
R: 1
www.reynichols.com

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Posted : June 1, 2020 3:57 pm
Scafontaine
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I will too. Send me a PM.

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Posted : June 1, 2020 10:46 pm
empressed
(@empressed)
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Posts: 125

I could use a crit and will reciprocate. It's a 12K word historical fantasy.

Victoria Dixon
Author of Mourn Their Courage
a 2010 Sandy Writing Contest Finalist
A Tribble Ate My Lunch: a Star Trek Cookbook (unpublished)
R=22
HM= 6
SHM=1
Finalist=1

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Posted : June 3, 2020 8:38 am
Reuben
(@reuben)
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Posts: 216

Sure, my PM's aren't working right now, though. Maybe send me an email.

Success is going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm ~ Winston Churchill
V37: R, R, R, HM
V38: SHM

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Posted : June 3, 2020 8:47 am
Temidayo
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Posts: 3

Hi Guys, I have send you all a PM. And Reuben, I have also sent you an email. I await your responses. I thought you guys would contact me via my email. So I didn't bother checking back. That's why my response came late. I am sorry about that. But anyway, I await your responses.

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Topic starter Posted : June 4, 2020 5:57 pm
David K
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Posts: 148

Empressed, I may have jumped in too late, so go with whats on offer, but happy to take a look.

David K

Two roads diverged in a yellow wood... I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference. Robert Frost (1915)
9 HMs: latest Q1 2021

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Posted : June 4, 2020 9:59 pm
empressed
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Thanks, David. I'm always grateful for a critique! If you still have time by the end of this coming week, I will have made changes and need fresh eyes. Either way, I'll be happy to read yours, so send it to victoria_dixon@msn.com.

Victoria Dixon
Author of Mourn Their Courage
a 2010 Sandy Writing Contest Finalist
A Tribble Ate My Lunch: a Star Trek Cookbook (unpublished)
R=22
HM= 6
SHM=1
Finalist=1

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Posted : June 5, 2020 2:53 am
David K
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Thanks, David. I'm always grateful for a critique! If you still have time by the end of this coming week, I will have made changes and need fresh eyes. Either way, I'll be happy to read yours, so send it to victoria_dixon@msn.com.

Happy to - david@davidkernot.com

Two roads diverged in a yellow wood... I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference. Robert Frost (1915)
9 HMs: latest Q1 2021

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Posted : June 8, 2020 10:38 pm
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