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Ania L.
(@anial)
Posts: 29
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Hello, everyone!

This is my first post and my first cry for help (my husband has reached his limit)! It's my first long story and I'm worried that it's unbalanced and maybe needs more action. Or any other thing that I can't even think of or name! I could really use some critique!

Thank you in advance, and I would love to reciprocate, if anyone will trust a newcomer Smile

 
Posted : July 14, 2020 5:38 pm
 TimE
(@time)
Posts: 404
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I'll take a look Ania, PM me.

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Posted : July 15, 2020 12:37 am
Rey Nichols
(@rnichols)
Posts: 63
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I'll take a look at it as well, PM me Smile

SHM: 1
HM: 9
R: 1
www.reynichols.com

 
Posted : July 15, 2020 2:57 am
Ania L.
(@anial)
Posts: 29
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Thank you!! I'm sorry for not mentioning it earlier, but please be prepared, the story is 10000 words long...

 
Posted : July 15, 2020 3:06 am
 TimE
(@time)
Posts: 404
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Thank you!! I'm sorry for not mentioning it earlier, but please be prepared, the story is 10,000 words long...

Not a problem

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Posted : July 15, 2020 3:11 am
(@apollo)
Posts: 24
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Hey, Ania, I would be happy to read your story. The others have far more experience with the competition, but I will do what I can.

 
Posted : July 15, 2020 6:28 am
Yelena
(@scribblesatdusk)
Posts: 225
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I'd be happy to critique your story. Me husband can relate to yours!

V36:Q3 HM V37: Q3 R, Q4 SHM V38: R,HM, F, HM V39: HM, SHM, SHM, SHM V40: SF, RWC, ?

 
Posted : July 16, 2020 12:28 pm
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