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Donovan Cedars
(@derbestin)
Active Member
Posts: 16

Right then!

 

I figure it's time to jump off into the deep end and see if I can get a story critique from you lovely souls! 😎

This'll be my first such outing here, so you'll have to forgive me if I'm unsure of standard practices. Like, do we tend to send the story to be reviewed over email or is it easier to add the viewer to a google doc? Whatever is easier for y'all would be fine with me.

I am certainly willing to do an exchange, though being the newbie I am, I'm entirely not sure how helpful my advice would be.

 

Anyway, if anyone would be interested in taking a look, let me know.

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Topic starter Posted : April 9, 2021 4:59 pm
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
Silver Star Member
Posts: 690

Always happy to take a look. DM me for my email - I prefer to work in google docs because I don’t have word on my laptop but I am flexible. 

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: F, P
ALWAYS available for critiques.

www.rebeccaetreasure.com

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Posted : April 10, 2021 9:25 am
Reuben
(@reuben)
Bronze Star Member
Posts: 216

If you'd like another look, I'm available. PM me.

Success is going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm ~ Winston Churchill
V37: R, R, R, HM
V38: SHM

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Posted : April 10, 2021 5:59 pm
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ajschultz6
(@ajschultz6)
Active Member
Posts: 12

I'd be happy to take a look. Sent you a PM.

v37: HM (Q3)
v38: R, ?

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Posted : April 12, 2021 3:37 pm
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NVHaskell
(@nvhaskell)
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Posts: 18

I'd be happy to critique. I'll pm you.

"It is perfectly okay to write garbage-as long as you edit brilliantly." C. J. Cherryh
V37- R, HM, SHM, HM
V38- HM, ?

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Posted : April 12, 2021 4:47 pm
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Scott_M_Sands
(@scott_m_sands)
Advanced Member
Posts: 25

Hi Donovan.

I'm a relative newbie to the forum as well. Happy to do a critique swap (although you seem to already have heaps of offers).

I actually wanted to mention the critiques here are fantastic. I got one done for last Quarter and the feedback I received was very encouraging, but also incredibly useful. 

So let them have at your story!

It's worth it.

 

Scott

 

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Posted : April 14, 2021 7:06 pm
Cray Dimensional
(@craydimensional)
Bronze Member
Posts: 77

Hi Donavan,

If you want me to review let me know. I will PM you my email.

Cray

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, P

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