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Rey Nichols
(@rnichols)
Posts: 63
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Hi everyone!

My short story that I'm considering for Q4 finally finished making its rounds in my writer's group, and I would like another pair of eyes on it, if anyone would be so willing.

Any kind of feedback would be welcome. I wrote it based of a random prompt challenge and I'm really proud of what I've done with it so far.

4200 words.

SHM: 1
HM: 9
R: 1
www.reynichols.com

 
Posted : August 4, 2020 2:19 pm
 TimE
(@time)
Posts: 405
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Hi everyone!

My short story that I'm considering for Q4 finally finished making its rounds in my writer's group, and I would like another pair of eyes on it, if anyone would be so willing.

Any kind of feedback would be welcome. I wrote it based of a random prompt challenge and I'm really proud of what I've done with it so far.

4200 words.

You keep offering to crit the same people as I do, so I feel I have to offer! I wouldn't expect to add a lot if it's been thru a crit group, but i'll do what i can.
Drop me a PM.

?

 
Posted : August 4, 2020 7:33 pm
Dustin Adams
(@tj_knight)
Posts: 1356
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I believe I owe you an exchange, yes?
Send it my way if you'd like.

Career:

1x Win
2x NW-F
2x S-F
9x S-HM
11x HM
7x R

 
Posted : August 5, 2020 1:42 am
(@scafontaine)
Posts: 119
Bronze Star Member
 

I'm willing in two weeks if that time frame works for you.

 
Posted : August 5, 2020 5:46 am
Rey Nichols
(@rnichols)
Posts: 63
Bronze Member
Topic starter
 

I'm willing in two weeks if that time frame works for you.

Sure, just drop me a PM when you have time. Smile

SHM: 1
HM: 9
R: 1
www.reynichols.com

 
Posted : August 5, 2020 1:15 pm
Yelena
(@scribblesatdusk)
Posts: 225
Silver Member
 

Nreavis,

I'd be happy to give it a look if you're still interested. I'll pm you my email.

V36:Q3 HM V37: Q3 R, Q4 SHM V38: R,HM, F, HM V39: HM, SHM, SHM, SHM V40: SF, RWC, ?

 
Posted : September 21, 2020 8:49 am
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