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Rey Nichols
(@rnichols)
Bronze Member
Posts: 56

Hi everyone!

My short story that I'm considering for Q4 finally finished making its rounds in my writer's group, and I would like another pair of eyes on it, if anyone would be so willing.

Any kind of feedback would be welcome. I wrote it based of a random prompt challenge and I'm really proud of what I've done with it so far.

4200 words.

HM: 5
R: 1
www.reynichols.com

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Topic starter Posted : August 4, 2020 2:19 pm
TimE
 TimE
(@time)
Silver Member
Posts: 338

Hi everyone!

My short story that I'm considering for Q4 finally finished making its rounds in my writer's group, and I would like another pair of eyes on it, if anyone would be so willing.

Any kind of feedback would be welcome. I wrote it based of a random prompt challenge and I'm really proud of what I've done with it so far.

4200 words.

You keep offering to crit the same people as I do, so I feel I have to offer! I wouldn't expect to add a lot if it's been thru a crit group, but i'll do what i can.
Drop me a PM.

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Posted : August 4, 2020 7:33 pm
Dustin Adams
(@axeminister)
Gold Member
Posts: 997

I believe I owe you an exchange, yes?
Send it my way if you'd like.

2x Finalist
2x Semi
6x Silver
9x HM
1 of 6 SilverHM. 1 of 3 DSF: Short Stories. My Finalist #1 Finalist #2 coming soon in 4th & Starlight

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Posted : August 5, 2020 1:42 am
Scafontaine
(@scafontaine)
Bronze Star Member
Posts: 119

I'm willing in two weeks if that time frame works for you.

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Posted : August 5, 2020 5:46 am
Rey Nichols
(@rnichols)
Bronze Member
Posts: 56

I'm willing in two weeks if that time frame works for you.

Sure, just drop me a PM when you have time. Smile

HM: 5
R: 1
www.reynichols.com

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Topic starter Posted : August 5, 2020 1:15 pm
scribblesatdusk
(@scribblesatdusk)
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Posts: 106

Nreavis,

I'd be happy to give it a look if you're still interested. I'll pm you my email.

V36:Q3 HM
V37: Q3 R, Q4 SHM
V38: R,HM, ?

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Posted : September 21, 2020 8:49 am
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