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Spencer_S
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Hello everyone!

I'm looking for some critiques for a story of mine. I will gladly look at your stories as well. PM me if interested, I appreciate it. Thank you.

Regards,

Spencer

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Posted : April 18, 2022 9:24 pm
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Hi Spencer,

Apologies, my current work schedule permits me from almost all writing/reading, however, a tidbit of advice: include length and genre in your request, so that would-be critiquers know if it's something they're well-suited to or not.

Best of luck.

R - HM - HM - HM - HM - P

 
Posted : April 20, 2022 1:40 am
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Morgan
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Posted by: @spencer_s

Hello everyone!

I'm looking for some critiques for a story of mine. I will gladly look at your stories as well. PM me if interested, I appreciate it. Thank you.

Regards,

Spencer

Hi Spencer. I'd be happy to take a look. Let me know if there's any specific kind of feedback you're looking for. Just DM the story whenever you're ready.

 

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Posted : April 20, 2022 2:45 pm
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Joe Benet
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Posted by: @ease

a tidbit of advice: include length and genre in your request, perhaps even a super-short summary, so that would-be critiquers know if it's something they're well-suited to or not.

Don't post the summary in the forum. If a future judge happens to scan it, there goes your anonymity. Posting it in the DM though, sounds safe.

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Posted : April 22, 2022 2:18 pm
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Morgan
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Posted by: @spencer_s

Hello everyone!

I'm looking for some critiques for a story of mine. I will gladly look at your stories as well. PM me if interested, I appreciate it. Thank you.

Regards,

Spencer

Just DM'd you some feedback. Hope it helps, and thanks for letting me read it. Give me a shout if you have any followup questions.

 

"Writers WRITE. And they finish what they start."
— Chuck Wendig
Drop me a line at https://morganbroadhead.com
SFx1
HMx1
Rx4

 
Posted : April 22, 2022 6:36 pm
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Posted by: @joebenet
Posted by: @ease

a tidbit of advice: include length and genre in your request, perhaps even a super-short summary, so that would-be critiquers know if it's something they're well-suited to or not.

Don't post the summary in the forum. If a future judge happens to scan it, there goes your anonymity. Posting it in the DM though, sounds safe.

Oh, shoot! You're totally right; can't believe I forgot. I've corrected the original post.

R - HM - HM - HM - HM - P

 
Posted : April 24, 2022 11:40 pm
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storysinger
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That's a request I haven't seen here before. Welcome to the forum Robert Palmer. 

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Posted : July 14, 2022 5:06 pm
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