Hi,
I could use some fresh eyes and critiques on my WOTF story. I got a rejection and I would like to figure out how to improve it. If I can rework my story into something better, I will submit it to a future quarter. I need to figure out where I am going wrong in my writing.
Thanks,
Apollo.
Anytime. Send me a PM
V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Published Finalist Volume 38
Pro’d out Q4V39
www.rebeccaetreasure.com
Managing Editor, Apex Magazine
I'm sure RSchibler is able to provide better feedback than I can, but if you would like a second perspective then I'd be happy to do my best. Just send me a PM. 
V37: -, -, R, SHM
V38: R, SHM, HM, HM
V39: SHM, HM, HM, ?
I am also willing to take a look. Send me a PM
SHM: 1
HM: 9
R: 1
www.reynichols.com
Thanks for all the responses! I really appreciate the critiques. I sent you all PM's. Since my brain is shutting down, I'll follow up tomorrow and send my story.
I'll look at the first two pages and give my thoughts. Chances are that's where the R took place. Unless you wrote 80 pages, then it took place on page 10. 
PM me.
Career:
1x Win
2x NW-F
2x S-F
9x S-HM
11x HM
7x R
Hey, Apollo! I would also love to help!
I'll take a look too. Won't be able to get back to you until end of next week though.
I'd be happy to offer my eyes as well.
V36:Q3 HM V37: Q3 R, Q4 SHM V38: R,HM, F, HM V39: HM, SHM, SHM, SHM V40: SF, RWC, ?
