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Apollo
(@apollo)
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Posts: 24

Hi,

I could use some fresh eyes and critiques on my WOTF story. I got a rejection and I would like to figure out how to improve it. If I can rework my story into something better, I will submit it to a future quarter. I need to figure out where I am going wrong in my writing.

Thanks,
Apollo.

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Topic starter Posted : July 14, 2020 3:45 pm
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
Silver Star Member
Posts: 743

Anytime. Send me a PM

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: F, SHM, P, P
Available for critiques - PM for availability.
www.rebeccaetreasure.com

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Posted : July 14, 2020 3:48 pm
PenMark
(@penmark)
Bronze Member
Posts: 53

I'm sure RSchibler is able to provide better feedback than I can, but if you would like a second perspective then I'd be happy to do my best. Just send me a PM. Smile

V37 Q3: R
V37 Q4: SHM
V38 Q1: R
V38 Q2: SHM
V38 Q3: Submitted
V38 Q4: Revising

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Posted : July 14, 2020 4:00 pm
Rey Nichols
(@rnichols)
Bronze Member
Posts: 56

I am also willing to take a look. Send me a PM Smile

HM: 5
R: 1
www.reynichols.com

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Posted : July 14, 2020 4:02 pm
Apollo
(@apollo)
Active Member
Posts: 24

Thanks for all the responses! I really appreciate the critiques. I sent you all PM's. Since my brain is shutting down, I'll follow up tomorrow and send my story.

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Topic starter Posted : July 14, 2020 4:23 pm
Dustin Adams
(@axeminister)
Gold Member
Posts: 997

I'll look at the first two pages and give my thoughts. Chances are that's where the R took place. Unless you wrote 80 pages, then it took place on page 10. wotf019

PM me.

2x Finalist
2x Semi
6x Silver
9x HM
1 of 6 SilverHM. 1 of 3 DSF: Short Stories. My Finalist #1 Finalist #2 coming soon in 4th & Starlight

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Posted : July 14, 2020 11:30 pm
Enchania
(@enchania)
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Posts: 18

Hey, Apollo! I would also love to help!

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Posted : July 15, 2020 3:08 am
Scafontaine
(@scafontaine)
Bronze Star Member
Posts: 119

I'll take a look too. Smile Won't be able to get back to you until end of next week though.

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Posted : July 15, 2020 6:43 am
scribblesatdusk
(@scribblesatdusk)
Bronze Star Member
Posts: 106

I'd be happy to offer my eyes as well.

V36:Q3 HM
V37: Q3 R, Q4 SHM
V38: R,HM, ?

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