In need of a critique
I could use some fresh eyes and critiques on my WOTF story. I got a rejection and I would like to figure out how to improve it. If I can rework my story into something better, I will submit it to a future quarter. I need to figure out where I am going wrong in my writing.
I'm sure RSchibler is able to provide better feedback than I can, but if you would like a second perspective then I'd be happy to do my best. Just send me a PM.
V37 Q3: R
V37 Q4: SHM
V38 Q1: R
V38 Q2: SHM
V38 Q3: Submitted
V38 Q4: Revising
I am also willing to take a look. Send me a PM
Thanks for all the responses! I really appreciate the critiques. I sent you all PM's. Since my brain is shutting down, I'll follow up tomorrow and send my story.
Hey, Apollo! I would also love to help!
I'll take a look too. Won't be able to get back to you until end of next week though.
I'd be happy to offer my eyes as well.
V37: Q3 R, Q4 SHM
V38: R,HM, ?