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Writhmic
(@writhmic)
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I tried my hand at writing a retelling (not for WotF). I did some experimenting with the style so I was hoping I could get some fresh eyes to critique it and let me know what works and what doesn't. I'd be happy to critique something in return!

It's about 5k words.

V39/Q2-SHM
V39/Q3-P

 
Posted : May 28, 2022 4:52 pm
angelslayah
(@angelslayah)
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Writhmic

I'll look at the first five pages if you like!

You can attach them to a PM. Or send me a Google doc, whatever works!

AS

 

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Posted : May 28, 2022 6:44 pm
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Writhmic
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Thanks! Sent you a PM

V39/Q2-SHM
V39/Q3-P

 
Posted : May 29, 2022 12:01 am
G.L. Bertram
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I'd be happy to look over it! Send me a PM; I can get it back to you by tomorrow.

2022 - Q3 - Submitted
Always open for critique exchange.

 
Posted : June 2, 2022 11:10 pm
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