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AndyDibble
(@andydibble)
Bronze Member
Posts: 83

Anyone should feel free to PM me their story to critique, first 450 or longer. I may ask you to critique a comparable portion of a story of mine.

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Posted : May 3, 2020 1:15 am
Dustin Adams
(@axeminister)
Gold Member
Posts: 975

If anyone is willing, I have a first 450 that I'd like someone to look at and tell me what they think.

Ready!

2x Finalist
2x Semi
5x Silver
9x HM
1 of 5 SilverHM. 1 of 3 DSF: Short Stories. My Finalist #1 Finalist #2 coming soon in 4th & Starlight

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Posted : May 3, 2020 5:59 am
Scafontaine
(@scafontaine)
Bronze Star Member
Posts: 119

Ready!

Thanks Dustin, wotf007 I sent you an email.

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Posted : May 3, 2020 8:33 pm
Corbin.Maxwell
(@corbin-maxwell)
Bronze Star Member
Posts: 223

Anyone up for a 450?

I ain't cut out to be no Jesse James.

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Posted : October 6, 2020 9:30 am
sorte001
(@sorte001)
Advanced Member
Posts: 32

I am down. I may need to catch up on the rules here. But I am open to a swap.  hey!

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Posted : October 8, 2020 11:00 am
Corbin.Maxwell
(@corbin-maxwell)
Bronze Star Member
Posts: 223

I am down. I may need to catch up on the rules here. But I am open to a swap.  hey!

I don't think there's many rules to a 450 swap. My email is corbin.maxwell@yahoo.com

Thank you.

I ain't cut out to be no Jesse James.

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Posted : October 9, 2020 10:55 am
czing
(@czing)
Bronze Star Member
Posts: 155

Looking for a first 450 swap if anyone is willing.

v36 Q1, Q3 - HM; Q4 - R
v37 Q1 - R; Q2 - SHM; Q4 - HM
v38 Q1 - HM; Q2 -P

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Posted : October 10, 2020 3:32 am
sorte001
(@sorte001)
Advanced Member
Posts: 32

Looking for a first 450 swap if anyone is willing.

I'll PM you with my email address Smile

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Posted : October 11, 2020 3:39 am
Corbin.Maxwell
(@corbin-maxwell)
Bronze Star Member
Posts: 223

Looking for a first 450 swap if anyone is willing.

If you want, I'll swap with you. Email me at: corbin.maxwell@yahoo.com

Thank you,

I ain't cut out to be no Jesse James.

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Posted : October 11, 2020 4:29 pm
Dustin Adams
(@axeminister)
Gold Member
Posts: 975

Popping in with a link - in case anyone missed the Kitchen Sink post:
https://www.writersofthefuture.com/forum/postid/1160/viewtopic.php?f=19&t=8050

There's a small group of us who plan to write 1-3 NEW 450 word story openers over the next three months.

The idea is to hone our story-opening skills through writing-reading-critiquing a story's first two pages.

Sign up below if interested!

2x Finalist
2x Semi
5x Silver
9x HM
1 of 5 SilverHM. 1 of 3 DSF: Short Stories. My Finalist #1 Finalist #2 coming soon in 4th & Starlight

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Posted : October 12, 2020 12:33 am
czing
(@czing)
Bronze Star Member
Posts: 155

Looking for a first 450 swap if anyone is willing.

If you want, I'll swap with you. Email me at: corbin.maxwell@yahoo.com

Thank you,

Work has super ramped up the stress levels so I haven't been able to tweak my story based on my first crit and have a couple crits I've offered out already in my waiting pile. If you are willing to wait until early Nov we could swap then????

v36 Q1, Q3 - HM; Q4 - R
v37 Q1 - R; Q2 - SHM; Q4 - HM
v38 Q1 - HM; Q2 -P

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Posted : October 17, 2020 2:20 am
Dustin Adams
(@axeminister)
Gold Member
Posts: 975

Anyone need a last-minute look at their first two pages?
PM me.

2x Finalist
2x Semi
5x Silver
9x HM
1 of 5 SilverHM. 1 of 3 DSF: Short Stories. My Finalist #1 Finalist #2 coming soon in 4th & Starlight

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Posted : March 23, 2021 7:11 am
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
Silver Star Member
Posts: 703

I might take you up on that once I get a crit I’m waiting for back.

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: F, P
Available for critiques - PM for availability.
www.rebeccaetreasure.com

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Posted : March 23, 2021 8:40 am
Cray Dimensional
(@craydimensional)
Bronze Star Member
Posts: 103

Looking for a 450 swap. If interested PM or email me.

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, P, P

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Posted : April 3, 2021 8:09 pm
Dustin Adams
(@axeminister)
Gold Member
Posts: 975

I'm down. I did some work on my 450 after the previous swap. I may have a specific question or two which I will ask separately. I'd like to see if I "fixed" the troubling issues. 

You can send to dustin  at   pdachb  dot     com      

2x Finalist
2x Semi
5x Silver
9x HM
1 of 5 SilverHM. 1 of 3 DSF: Short Stories. My Finalist #1 Finalist #2 coming soon in 4th & Starlight

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Posted : April 4, 2021 4:00 am
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Dustin Adams
(@axeminister)
Gold Member
Posts: 975

Someone send me something... Nom nom nom.

My e-mail is in the post above this one.

Or, I guess, you can attach stuff in the forum?

2x Finalist
2x Semi
5x Silver
9x HM
1 of 5 SilverHM. 1 of 3 DSF: Short Stories. My Finalist #1 Finalist #2 coming soon in 4th & Starlight

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Posted : April 15, 2021 12:29 pm
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CeciBlack
(@ceciblack)
Active Member
Posts: 15
Posted by: @axeminister

Someone send me something... Nom nom nom.

My e-mail is in the post above this one.

Or, I guess, you can attach stuff in the forum?

Dustin I’ll send you my first 450 tonight 👍

 

Ceci

Ceci Black
Writer, Musician
Free Album: Captains of Industry (vocals, lyrics, keys & occasional bass)
Composer: Will & Whit The Musical based on Laura Lee Gulledge’s young adult graphic novel, Will & Whit.
v38: HM (Q1)

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Posted : May 1, 2021 3:05 pm
Scott_M_Sands
(@scott_m_sands)
Bronze Member
Posts: 59

Looking for a critique swap for my 450w opening. Anyone interested?

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Posted : May 6, 2021 5:32 am
scribblesatdusk
(@scribblesatdusk)
Bronze Member
Posts: 72

@scott_m_sands

 

I don't have anything to swap but would be happy to critique! 

V36:Q3 HM V37: Q 3R, Q4 SHM V38: Q1R, ?

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Posted : May 6, 2021 4:40 pm
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Joel C. Scoberg
(@joel-c-scoberg)
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Posts: 17

@scott_m_sands

Hi Scott

I'd be happy to have a swap if you're still interested? Feel free to PM me if you are.

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Posted : May 17, 2021 7:07 am
Joel C. Scoberg
(@joel-c-scoberg)
Active Member
Posts: 17

I'm new to the 450 word swap but like the sound of it! I'm looking for a swap, if anyone is interested.

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Posted : May 19, 2021 4:56 am
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