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Corbin.Maxwell
(@corbin-maxwell)
Bronze Star Member
Posts: 232

You’ve read for me. Mostly I’m worried about the first paragraph. I’ll send it to you later. Thanks.

I ain't cut out to be no Jesse James.

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Posted : June 7, 2019 12:33 pm
KDLightle
(@kdlightle)
Active Member
Posts: 12

It kinda feels like I’m being given the silent treatment for some reason. Like I got wished into the cornfield.

I'm not ignoring you!!! I'm just busily trying to finish this Quarter's story!!!!!

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Posted : June 7, 2019 2:49 pm
Corbin.Maxwell
(@corbin-maxwell)
Bronze Star Member
Posts: 232

Understood.

I ain't cut out to be no Jesse James.

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Posted : June 7, 2019 2:56 pm
Gmanwriter
(@gmanwriter)
Advanced Member
Posts: 38

Anyone willing to swap the first 450 or so words for their Q4? Send me a PM if interested.

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Posted : July 2, 2019 5:56 am
Thomas Woodward
(@thomas-woodward)
Bronze Member
Posts: 54

I'm also interested in swapping 450s for Q4 - please pm me

5x R
10x HM
2020 Superstars Writing Seminar scholarship award recipient
"No subject is terrible if the story is true, if the prose is clean and honest, and if it affirms courage and grace under pressure." — Ernest Hemingway

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Posted : July 3, 2019 1:54 pm
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
Silver Star Member
Posts: 743

I know I didn’t get back to a few people on requests - we’ve had an unusually stressful year - but all of you are welcome to shoot me your 450s. Best,

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: F, SHM, P, P
Available for critiques - PM for availability.
www.rebeccaetreasure.com

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Posted : July 3, 2019 1:58 pm
mishabazarov04
(@mishabazarov04)
New Member
Posts: 3

Hi everybody,

My name is Michael and I am generally new to this thread. This is my first time trying WoTF, and I was wondering if anyone was interesting in swapping the first 450 words for so for quarter 4. If so, please PM,

Thanks so much, Michael.

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Posted : July 25, 2019 11:10 am
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
Silver Star Member
Posts: 743

Send it my way Michael!

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: F, SHM, P, P
Available for critiques - PM for availability.
www.rebeccaetreasure.com

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Posted : July 25, 2019 11:34 am
Dustin Adams
(@axeminister)
Gold Member
Posts: 997

I'm up for a 450 or two if anyone has 'em ready.

PM me for my e-mail if you don't have it, just send if you do!

2x Finalist
2x Semi
6x Silver
9x HM
1 of 6 SilverHM. 1 of 3 DSF: Short Stories. My Finalist #1 Finalist #2 coming soon in 4th & Starlight

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Posted : August 6, 2019 10:08 pm
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
Silver Star Member
Posts: 743

Yayay! Me first!

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: F, SHM, P, P
Available for critiques - PM for availability.
www.rebeccaetreasure.com

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Posted : August 7, 2019 2:23 am
Dustin Adams
(@axeminister)
Gold Member
Posts: 997

I read two good ones.

Anyone else?

2x Finalist
2x Semi
6x Silver
9x HM
1 of 6 SilverHM. 1 of 3 DSF: Short Stories. My Finalist #1 Finalist #2 coming soon in 4th & Starlight

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Posted : August 12, 2019 6:13 am
czing
(@czing)
Bronze Star Member
Posts: 199

Sure if you're still willing. Do you have one to swap?

v36 Q1, Q3 - HM; Q4 - R
v37 Q1 - R; Q2 - SHM; Q4 - HM
v38 Q1 - HM; Q2 -SHM; Q3 - P

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Posted : August 13, 2019 10:55 am
Dustin Adams
(@axeminister)
Gold Member
Posts: 997

Sure if you're still willing. Do you have one to swap?

Indeed!
I just received mine back from two critters. I'll update and be ready in a day or two (around Aug 17-18)
Please send a PM for my e-mail, or PM me yours. wotf008

2x Finalist
2x Semi
6x Silver
9x HM
1 of 6 SilverHM. 1 of 3 DSF: Short Stories. My Finalist #1 Finalist #2 coming soon in 4th & Starlight

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Posted : August 14, 2019 12:27 am
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
Silver Star Member
Posts: 743

Did you get mine Dustin? I haven’t received yours.

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: F, SHM, P, P
Available for critiques - PM for availability.
www.rebeccaetreasure.com

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Posted : August 14, 2019 4:16 am
Dustin Adams
(@axeminister)
Gold Member
Posts: 997

Becky,

I did. I replied on Aug 7. I just resent.

I didn't send mine. I am planning to send a later draft to you if that's OK.
Actually, the 450 is about done. Now to get the ending where I want it. :O

2x Finalist
2x Semi
6x Silver
9x HM
1 of 6 SilverHM. 1 of 3 DSF: Short Stories. My Finalist #1 Finalist #2 coming soon in 4th & Starlight

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Posted : August 14, 2019 8:56 am
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
Silver Star Member
Posts: 743

Weird. I have nothing from you. I’ll keep checking and let you know if it shows up.

Correction, I have one message from you from Aug 7 and nothing since.

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: F, SHM, P, P
Available for critiques - PM for availability.
www.rebeccaetreasure.com

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Posted : August 14, 2019 12:13 pm
Dustin Adams
(@axeminister)
Gold Member
Posts: 997

I'll send a PM.
Your 450 was solid and I only had general thoughts.

2x Finalist
2x Semi
6x Silver
9x HM
1 of 6 SilverHM. 1 of 3 DSF: Short Stories. My Finalist #1 Finalist #2 coming soon in 4th & Starlight

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Posted : August 15, 2019 1:46 am
AlexH
(@alexh)
Silver Member
Posts: 253

I'm up for swaps if anyone has them - send me a PM (it doesn't have to be for Q4 if you don't have a draft right now). wotf008 I'm working on three drafts but can get the first 450 words of my preferred (until I change my mind again) one ready by Monday at the latest.

35: - R R R | 36: R HM R R | 37: HM HM HM SHM | 38: HM HM

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Posted : August 28, 2019 1:24 am
AndyDibble
(@andydibble)
Bronze Member
Posts: 86

I have some extra time now so if anyone want me to critique the first 450 of their piece, I'm happy to. PM me

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Posted : September 5, 2019 6:53 pm
einstein36
(@einstein36)
Bronze Member
Posts: 69

Hi there,
Would anyone here be interested in taking a read of the beginning of my story for the next volume contest? It's about 450+
Just PM or email me and I will send it along your way....
Thanks..

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Posted : September 29, 2019 5:58 pm
MrH
 MrH
(@mrh)
Member
Posts: 98

New to the forum, but not to the contest.

Looking to swap, or just send for feedback. The more critical the better, be harsh. PM me.

I also have one that's near the limit and needs to be dragged over the coals, if anyone's keen.

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Posted : October 24, 2019 4:04 pm
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
Silver Star Member
Posts: 743

Always. PM me

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: F, SHM, P, P
Available for critiques - PM for availability.
www.rebeccaetreasure.com

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Posted : October 25, 2019 4:22 am
MrH
 MrH
(@mrh)
Member
Posts: 98

Thankyou.

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Posted : October 25, 2019 10:08 am
AlexH
(@alexh)
Silver Member
Posts: 253

New to the forum, but not to the contest.

Looking to swap, or just send for feedback. The more critical the better, be harsh. PM me.

I also have one that's near the limit and needs to be dragged over the coals, if anyone's keen.

I'm always up for 450 swaps.

35: - R R R | 36: R HM R R | 37: HM HM HM SHM | 38: HM HM

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Posted : November 2, 2019 8:30 am
AlexH
(@alexh)
Silver Member
Posts: 253

Thankyou.

Just letting you know I've e-mailed this, in case my critique didn't reach you like happened with another member. wotf008

I have had something technical done to my e-mail account so that shouldn't happen again...

35: - R R R | 36: R HM R R | 37: HM HM HM SHM | 38: HM HM

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Posted : November 6, 2019 6:25 am
Dustin Adams
(@axeminister)
Gold Member
Posts: 997

Alex,

Just saw your PM. Just wanted to apologize publicly for not replying for two months. 🙁

Next 450 of yours - hit me!

2x Finalist
2x Semi
6x Silver
9x HM
1 of 6 SilverHM. 1 of 3 DSF: Short Stories. My Finalist #1 Finalist #2 coming soon in 4th & Starlight

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Posted : November 21, 2019 4:01 am
AndyDibble
(@andydibble)
Bronze Member
Posts: 86

I'm happy to do critiques. PM me.

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Posted : November 23, 2019 11:16 pm
Dustin Adams
(@axeminister)
Gold Member
Posts: 997

Bumping to remind folks this exists.

I'm open if anyone has something ready, or even wants to run a first draft 450 by me.

2x Finalist
2x Semi
6x Silver
9x HM
1 of 6 SilverHM. 1 of 3 DSF: Short Stories. My Finalist #1 Finalist #2 coming soon in 4th & Starlight

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Posted : April 24, 2020 7:27 am
TheGreatToddman
(@thegreattoddman_1617101148)
Active Member
Posts: 10

I haven't started my story for this quarter (3 I think?), and I have limited editting experience. That said, I'd be happy to take a peek over any first 450's you have.

Please reach out to me if you'd like to exchange. DM is alright, however I'm new to the forum so shooting me an email might have a quicker response.

Take care of yourself.

WotF
V37 Q1: HM

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Posted : April 24, 2020 1:24 pm
Scafontaine
(@scafontaine)
Bronze Star Member
Posts: 119

If anyone is willing, I have a first 450 that I'd like someone to look at and tell me what they think.

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Posted : May 2, 2020 11:36 pm
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