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(@brydar)
Posts: 46
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I beat my deadline by about 5 minutes! It may not be perfect but I got the first 450 of my story out to those listed above via PM. Please let me know if you have any problems reading it. I am anxious to read your 450's folks, you may PM me back or e-mail me; Brydar at Yahoo dot com.

Entered V32/Q2, Q3, Q4
Not long ago scientists postulated that our entire universe was quite possibly a hologram. I KNEW it; we ARE in the Matrix!

 
Posted : April 24, 2015 10:02 am
(@jmiriah)
Posts: 7
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Hey, is anyone else interested in a new round of first-450 exchange?
If so, PM me. Thanks!

Miriah Hetherington
http://miriah.net/
V31 Q3: HM
V32 Q1: R
V32 Q2: sHM
V32 Q3: HM

 
Posted : May 23, 2015 11:53 am
(@elratliff)
Posts: 26
Advanced Member
 

Hello all,

This is my first time doing WotF, and I'd like to swap my first 450 with someone(s) for feedback.
PM me if interested. Thanks!

2 x SHM
1 x HM
2 x R

 
Posted : June 11, 2015 12:23 pm
Dustin Adams
(@tj_knight)
Posts: 1354
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Ellie,

Received. Will look it over soon!

Career:

1x Win
2x NW-F
2x S-F
9x S-HM
11x HM
7x R

 
Posted : June 16, 2015 8:34 am
Dustin Adams
(@tj_knight)
Posts: 1354
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Anyone willing to review a prelim 450 (460 actually) for my possible Q1?
Am of course happy to exchange, even a non-wotf if that's all you have available.
Or a flash/complete.

Career:

1x Win
2x NW-F
2x S-F
9x S-HM
11x HM
7x R

 
Posted : July 14, 2015 7:12 am
(@elratliff)
Posts: 26
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Anyone willing to review a prelim 450 (460 actually) for my possible Q1?
Am of course happy to exchange, even a non-wotf if that's all you have available.
Or a flash/complete.

I'll look at it, Dustin, without the exchange. You've got my email. I don't have anything of my own ready at the moment. wotf001

2 x SHM
1 x HM
2 x R

 
Posted : July 14, 2015 10:08 am
(@elratliff)
Posts: 26
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I just looked at my calendar and realized we'll be midway through Q4 next weekend. Anyone up for a round of first-450 critique exchanges the weekend of Aug 15th-16th?

Edit
Just to clarify what I'd meant by "the weekend": Send me your first 450 by 11:59pm PST Friday, and I'll have your feedback done by 11:59pm PST Sunday.

2 x SHM
1 x HM
2 x R

 
Posted : August 5, 2015 10:39 am
Galen
(@galen)
Posts: 58
Bronze Star Member
 

Good thought. I would be keen to collaborate in a 450 critique exchange. Pretty much anytime works for me.

Finalist x2
Semi x1
SHM x5
HM x9
R - lots!

 
Posted : August 6, 2015 8:47 am
(@elratliff)
Posts: 26
Advanced Member
 

Galen - I've sent you an email!

2 x SHM
1 x HM
2 x R

 
Posted : August 9, 2015 9:38 pm
Galen
(@galen)
Posts: 58
Bronze Star Member
 

Great! I've sent it over just because I was at it, but your timeline is just fine by me.

Finalist x2
Semi x1
SHM x5
HM x9
R - lots!

 
Posted : August 10, 2015 12:34 am
(@ivy-fairhaven)
Posts: 3
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Hello!

Is anyone else looking to exchange the first 450 for Q4? wotf007 If you are, please let me know with a PM.

Thank you!

 
Posted : September 2, 2015 4:46 pm
(@elratliff)
Posts: 26
Advanced Member
 

I could use another first 450 exchange. PM me if interested! Thanks!

2 x SHM
1 x HM
2 x R

 
Posted : September 18, 2015 5:00 am
Dustin Adams
(@tj_knight)
Posts: 1354
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I'm ready.
You?
Call me! wotf011

Career:

1x Win
2x NW-F
2x S-F
9x S-HM
11x HM
7x R

 
Posted : October 23, 2015 6:10 am
gmanwrites
(@gmanwriter)
Posts: 56
Bronze Star Member
 

Anyone still need to do a last minute exchange?

3 x SHM
10 x HM
"Dwell on the beauty of life. Watch the stars, and see yourself running with them." -Marcus Aurelius

 
Posted : December 27, 2015 8:39 am
Dustin Adams
(@tj_knight)
Posts: 1354
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No one has posted in this thread since December?
Or is my Internetweb being funky?

Anyway, with 1 month left, my inbox is open. For a swap - or just a read. I'm up for either if you don't have time to read, but want eyes on your start.

Career:

1x Win
2x NW-F
2x S-F
9x S-HM
11x HM
7x R

 
Posted : June 3, 2016 8:15 am
(@elratliff)
Posts: 26
Advanced Member
 

Anyone interested in a first-450 exchange this weekend (Mar. 11-12)? If you send me something by 11:59pm PST Friday, I'll have your feedback done by 11:59pm PST Sunday.

2 x SHM
1 x HM
2 x R

 
Posted : March 6, 2017 7:47 am
(@jficke13)
Posts: 80
Bronze Member
 

Anyone else feel a kick in the patoot from the end of last quarter and the awards riding some creativity into the beginning of this quarter?

I'm up for a (very) early first 450 word exchange if there are any takers?

HM x2, Vol. 34 Q4 - 3rd. http://www.jonficke.com

 
Posted : April 5, 2017 12:18 pm
(@jnae-rae)
Posts: 91
Bronze Member
 

I'm up to it. I have story originally started for this quarter before I had a dry spell after my Best Friend passed. I ended up cleaning up a submission that was rejected for an anthology for Q2 instead.

So, PM me the file and I'll see about PMing you mine.

HM Q1 2015, Q3 & Q4 2016.
R Q1 & Q2 2017
The Trade's On, in Issue 8 of Sci Phi Journal, November 2015
Naidin's Song: Blood Bound, published August 2016
Nine-Tenths, on Empyreome (Weekly Flash Fiction,) June 2017
wotf024

 
Posted : April 5, 2017 5:06 pm
Dustin Adams
(@tj_knight)
Posts: 1354
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Let's do this!

Send me a PM for a 450 or 1k exchange for Q3.

Let's make finalist!!!

Career:

1x Win
2x NW-F
2x S-F
9x S-HM
11x HM
7x R

 
Posted : April 28, 2017 3:22 am
(@elratliff)
Posts: 26
Advanced Member
 

My Q4 story is nowhere near started yet, but I'll be happy to exchange 450 critiques with anyone this quarter. So PM/email me if you have one ready, and I will send mine as soon as I have something written!

2 x SHM
1 x HM
2 x R

 
Posted : July 10, 2017 9:54 am
Dustin Adams
(@tj_knight)
Posts: 1354
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Do I have someone's 450?
I've got one on my desktop, and I can't find in my e-mail where I received it. Very strange because I'm an e-mail freak...
Anyway, reply here or send a PM if I have yours and haven't replied.
Incidentally, very good anonymity. wotf009

ETA: Mystery solved!

I'm planning a trip for the rest of this quarter, but my mailbox will open back up for Q1 on Oct 2nd.

4 in 35!

Career:

1x Win
2x NW-F
2x S-F
9x S-HM
11x HM
7x R

 
Posted : September 18, 2017 6:18 am
(@elratliff)
Posts: 26
Advanced Member
 

Who's up for a first-450 exchange for Q2? Send me a PM if interested.

2 x SHM
1 x HM
2 x R

 
Posted : March 1, 2019 8:48 pm
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
Posts: 957
Platinum Member
 

Always up for crits

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Published Finalist Volume 38
Pro’d out Q4V39
www.rebeccaetreasure.com

Managing Editor, Apex Magazine

 
Posted : March 2, 2019 12:18 am
Henckel
(@henckel)
Posts: 465
Silver Star Member
 

Hi there. Anyone up for a 450 swap?

Just email or pm me.

WOTF Stats
(2014) V31 – R
(2018) V35 – HM
(2019) V36 – HM, SHM
(2020) V37 – R, HM, SHM, Finalist
(2021) V38 – SF, SHM, SHM, HM
(2022) V39 – HM, SHM, SHM, SHM
(2023) V40 - HM, SF, tba, tba

 
Posted : May 7, 2019 3:52 pm
(@kdlightle)
Posts: 12
Active Member
 

I'm in. Is this still a thing? How do I get in on this?

Something I'm confused on: If we're supposed to be keeping these confidential - no names, no titles, whatever - how does swapping my story bit with Writer X's story bit, and critiquing on each other's work remain confidential? I know that I got Writer X's work, and Writer X knows they got my work... doesn't that reduce the confidentiality? Can someone explain please?

 
Posted : May 10, 2019 5:30 pm
Disgruntled Peony
(@disgruntledpeony)
Posts: 1283
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Something I'm confused on: If we're supposed to be keeping these confidential - no names, no titles, whatever - how does swapping my story bit with Writer X's story bit, and critiquing on each other's work remain confidential? I know that I got Writer X's work, and Writer X knows they got my work... doesn't that reduce the confidentiality? Can someone explain please?

The people you specifically need confidentiality from are the judges. Anything that might identify your story should be discussed in private confidence (PM or e-mail) with the person/people with whom you trade, in order to prevent disqualification. It is a bit of an honor system in that you're trusting your fellow entrants to keep from publically reveal anything about your work, but they're trusting you to do the same, so it evens out.

If you are in difficulties with a book, try the element of surprise: attack it at an hour when it isn't expecting it. ~ H.G. Wells
If a person offend you, and you are in doubt as to whether it was intentional or not, do not resort to extreme measures; simply watch your chance and hit him with a brick. ~ Mark Twain
R, SF, SHM, SHM, SHM, F, R, HM, SHM, R, HM, R, F, SHM, SHM, SHM, SF, SHM, 1st Place (Q2 V38)
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4th and Starlight: e-book | paperback

 
Posted : May 11, 2019 2:14 am
(@kdlightle)
Posts: 12
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The people you specifically need confidentiality from are the judges. Anything that might identify your story should be discussed in private confidence (PM or e-mail) with the person/people with whom you trade, in order to prevent disqualification. It is a bit of an honor system in that you're trusting your fellow entrants to keep from publically reveal anything about your work, but they're trusting you to do the same, so it evens out.

AAAh. Ok. Thank you!

 
Posted : May 11, 2019 2:29 am
Corbin.Maxwell
(@corbin-maxwell)
Posts: 269
Silver Member
 

I got a 450 if anyone is up for a quickie.

I ain't cut out to be no Jesse James.

 
Posted : June 5, 2019 8:17 am
Corbin.Maxwell
(@corbin-maxwell)
Posts: 269
Silver Member
 

It kinda feels like I’m being given the silent treatment for some reason. Like I got wished into the cornfield.

I ain't cut out to be no Jesse James.

 
Posted : June 7, 2019 11:32 am
RETreasure
(@rschibler)
Posts: 957
Platinum Member
 

If I haven’t seen it I’ll read it. I’ve had a lot going on and am not certain who I’ve read for.

V34: R,HM,R
V35: HM,R,R,HM
V36: R,HM,HM,SHM
V37: HM,SF,SHM,SHM
V38: (P)F, SHM, F, F
V39: SHM, SHM, HM, SHM
Published Finalist Volume 38
Pro’d out Q4V39
www.rebeccaetreasure.com

Managing Editor, Apex Magazine

 
Posted : June 7, 2019 12:31 pm
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