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Henckel
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Hi there. Does anyone have time to look over 900 words for me? It’s the prologue to a novel, so not for WOTF. In short, I’m looking to get your impressions. Is the prologue compelling enough for a person to keep reading? Is the pacing feel alright? Do the prose flow alright? So, nothing too intense.
If you’re interested, please PM or email me.

…and I’m happy to return the favor.

WOTF Stats
(2014) V31 – R
(2018) V35 – HM
(2019) V36 – HM, SHM
(2020) V37 – R, HM, SHM, Finalist
(2021) V38 – SF, SHM, SHM, HM
(2022) V39 – HM, SHM, SHM, SHM
(2023) V40 - HM, SF, tba, tba

 
Posted : September 27, 2018 12:05 pm
Henckel
(@henckel)
Posts: 465
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Thanks for the PMs. I'll send now.

WOTF Stats
(2014) V31 – R
(2018) V35 – HM
(2019) V36 – HM, SHM
(2020) V37 – R, HM, SHM, Finalist
(2021) V38 – SF, SHM, SHM, HM
(2022) V39 – HM, SHM, SHM, SHM
(2023) V40 - HM, SF, tba, tba

 
Posted : September 28, 2018 9:50 pm
(@harion)
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Just send it over PM. I'll read it in a jiffy.

Potpourri
WOTF entries:
Q1 Vol 29 - R
Q3 Vol 35 - HM
Q4 Vol 35 - R

 
Posted : October 2, 2018 11:53 am
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