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G.L. Bertram
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The critique exchange here is awesome. With everyone's help, I brought my story down from 16,000 words to 9,000. Now the story needs another round of critique.

Let me know how you like my characters, whether you feel the world is flushed out enough, and if the story is meaningful to you.

I'll happily read your story, too.

2022 - Q3 - Submitted
Always open for critique exchange.

 
Posted : June 2, 2022 9:20 pm
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MarathonCoder
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If you're still looking, I'd love to swap.  I have a 4,400-word sci-fi story that's ready to be evaluated.

V38: HM, R, R, HM
V39: RWC, HM, P, WIP

 
Posted : June 8, 2022 4:59 am
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G.L. Bertram
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@chwalter I'll send you a PM!

2022 - Q3 - Submitted
Always open for critique exchange.

 
Posted : June 8, 2022 12:12 pm
Álex Souza
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Posted by: @g-l-bertram

The critique exchange here is awesome. With everyone's help, I brought my story down from 16,000 words to 9,000. Now the story needs another round of critique.

Let me know how you like my characters, whether you feel the world is flushed out enough, and if the story is meaningful to you.

I'll happily read your story, too.

I'm game if you still want it. Send me a PM if you're interested.

V38: Q3-R; Q4-HM
V39: Q1-R; Q2-N/A; Q3-P
Critters.org MPCx4
Slush reader for The Common Tongue Magazine.
Debut short-story "Invisible Bodies" published in HyphenPunk and reprinted in MetaStellar.

 
Posted : June 9, 2022 1:17 pm
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