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(@ar_cv)
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Hi, there! I'm new here to the forum but have submitted to the contest before. I'll be happy to provide critique in return, of course.

Thanks!

 
Posted : December 10, 2022 12:57 pm
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Hello there, Sean. I'd be happy to take a look. Feel free to PM me. And welcome to the forum! Smile

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Posted : December 14, 2022 8:38 am
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Hello fellow writers. Anyone have time to read a short story a little less than 3400 words?

I will be happy to read one in return.

Today's science fiction is tomorrow's reality-D.R.Sweeney
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Posted : December 24, 2022 10:07 am
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Posted by: @storysinger

Hello fellow writers. Anyone have time to read a short story a little less than 3400 words?

I will be happy to read one in return.

Just sent you a PM. Smile

 

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Posted : December 24, 2022 1:07 pm
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(@ar_cv)
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Posted by: @storysinger

Hello fellow writers. Anyone have time to read a short story a little less than 3400 words?

I will be happy to read one in return.

Feel free to send it to me as well!

Also, thank you again to everyone who critiqued my story.

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Posted : December 26, 2022 3:18 pm
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Posted by: @storysinger

Hello fellow writers. Anyone have time to read a short story a little less than 3400 words?

I will be happy to read one in return.

I'm game if you still need an opinion. 

Same for you too, @ar_cv

DM me or send it to my email: anna.adamantiumskin@gmail.com

 

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Posted : December 28, 2022 5:32 pm
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