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Dugan Lentz
(@wildkardde)
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I would love to get some feedback on this story (7,000 words, fantasy) that I plan to submit next quarter. I'm fairly new to this contest, so not sure how much I can offer in return, but I'd be more than willing to read any genre. 

HM-V39/Q2
SHM-V39/Q3
R-V39/Q4

 
Posted : November 12, 2022 10:30 am
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V. R. Lassmann
(@vrlass)
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I can exchange it for 3x 2k worders, but I am on vacation now for 2 weeks (in what seems to be most paradisial of places :)), so no a fast reply from my side.

 
Posted : November 12, 2022 12:03 pm
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Dugan Lentz
(@wildkardde)
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Awesome! I'll DM you the story and you can take your time.  

HM-V39/Q2
SHM-V39/Q3
R-V39/Q4

 
Posted : November 12, 2022 3:23 pm
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Anna X
(@annax)
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I can give an extra opinion too if you'd like. I'm still working on all of mine so nothing yet to exchange. You can dm me or email me at: anna.adamantiumskin@gmail.com

~ I honestly believe that good stories write themselves. You can always start writing a story, but the characters tell their own tales and if you're lucky enough, you get to merely be in the audience watching everything unfold. ~ 8/1/2022
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WotF - 2022, V39 Q4: R
WotF - 2022, V40 Q1: Submitted; Q2: Work in Progress;

 
Posted : November 13, 2022 8:00 am
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storysinger
(@storysinger)
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I sent you a DM Dugan. I'll be happy to read your story.

Today's science fiction is tomorrow's reality-D.R.Sweeney
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Posted : November 13, 2022 8:17 am
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ajschultz6
(@ajschultz6)
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I sent you a PM!

v37: Q3HM
v38: Q1R, Q2HM, Q3HM
v39: Q2HM, Q3HM, Q4HM
v40: Q1 In Progress
I'm available for critique exchanges via PM. Note: I will not be available for exchanges from 12/17/22-1/1/23.

 
Posted : November 13, 2022 11:09 am
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Dugan Lentz
(@wildkardde)
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@annax Thanks! I'll send you an email.

HM-V39/Q2
SHM-V39/Q3
R-V39/Q4

 
Posted : November 13, 2022 2:34 pm
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