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Critique Swap - 2500 Word, Dystopian

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Writhmic
(@writhmic)
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I've got a 2500ish word story in need of critiquing. It's dystopian and I don't plan on submitting this to WotF. I can critique anything of similar length. Anyone up for it?

V39/Q2-SHM
V39/Q3-SHM
V39/Q4-RWC
V40/Q1-WIP

 
Posted : October 12, 2022 12:26 pm
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DoctorJest
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I have nothing to exchange with it right now, but I can give this a critique if you like.

DQ: 0 / R: 0 / RWC: 0 / HM: 11 / SHM: 6 / SF: 1 / F: 1
Rewriting Q1.V40, first draft complete
Last four: SHM • SHM • SF • HM
Revised SHM ('Ashwright') at PodCastle

 
Posted : October 12, 2022 5:28 pm
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Adrian
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Happy to do a swap. Mine is around 4k words, if that works for you. Smile I will DM.

7x HM
1x SHM

 
Posted : November 5, 2022 11:14 am
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Anna X
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Posted by: @writhmic

I've got a 2500ish word story in need of critiquing. It's dystopian and I don't plan on submitting this to WotF. I can critique anything of similar length. Anyone up for it?

I need to get writing so I can have something to swap, but I'll be happy to give you an opinion if you'd still like. Feel free to dm me or email me at: anna.adamantiumskin@gmail.com

 

~ I honestly believe that good stories write themselves. You can always start writing a story, but the characters tell their own tales and if you're lucky enough, you get to merely be in the audience watching everything unfold. ~ 8/1/2022
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WotF - 2022, V39 Q4: R
WotF - 2022, V40 Q1: In Progress

 
Posted : November 13, 2022 7:22 pm
Writhmic
(@writhmic)
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@annax Hey, I'm actually not looking to swap right now. Thanks for the offer though!

V39/Q2-SHM
V39/Q3-SHM
V39/Q4-RWC
V40/Q1-WIP

 
Posted : November 13, 2022 7:23 pm
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Spencer_S
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Hello there. If you're still working on the story, I'd be happy to take a look. No exchange needed.

“Stories are the collective wisdom of everyone who has ever lived. Your job as a storyteller is not simply to entertain. Nor is it to be noticed for the way your turn a phrase. You have a very important job—one of the most important. Your job is to let people know that everyone shares their feelings—and that these feelings bind us. Your job is a healing art, and like all healers, you have a responsibility. Let people know they are not alone. You must make people understand that we are all the same.”
Brian McDonald
2022: Second Place Winner V39 Q1
2021: HM, HM, SHM
2020: R
2019: SHM, R
2018: HM
2017: HM

 
Posted : November 24, 2022 8:06 am
Writhmic
(@writhmic)
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@spencer_s Thank you for the offer but I've got that story on hold right now.

V39/Q2-SHM
V39/Q3-SHM
V39/Q4-RWC
V40/Q1-WIP

 
Posted : November 24, 2022 8:59 am
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