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Cray Dimensional
(@craydimensional)
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Looking for critique on my 6100 fantasy. I am willing to critique your short story in return. Just PM me your email.

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, P

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Topic starter Posted : April 22, 2021 2:53 pm
Reuben
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Posted by: @craydimensional

Looking for critique on my 6100 fantasy. I am willing to critique your short story in return. Just PM me your email.

I should be able to, especially if you get it to me by tomorrow. I've pmed you.

Success is going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm ~ Winston Churchill
V37: R, R, R, HM
V38: SHM

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Posted : April 22, 2021 3:45 pm
ajschultz6
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I'm happy to take a look. Sent you a PM.

v37: HM (Q3)
v38: R, ?

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Posted : April 23, 2021 4:57 pm
DW
 DW
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Posted by: @craydimensional

Looking for critique on my 6100 fantasy. I am willing to critique your short story in return. Just PM me your email.

I'd be happy to swap critiques. I'll Pm you.

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Posted : April 24, 2021 1:41 pm
Dustin Adams
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Cray,

Although I've only read a 450 of yours, I found it quite dandy.

I'd have a look at this story - after this round of critiques. Put me down for the first reader of the revision.

And forget them Rs. Every one I received, I got *after* my first finalist. They happen. And then... they don't. hey!  

2x Finalist
2x Semi
5x Silver
9x HM
Eight EDF stories. 1 of 3 DSF: Short Stories. My Finalist #1 Finalist #2 coming soon in 4th & Starlight

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Posted : April 24, 2021 2:12 pm
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Cray Dimensional
(@craydimensional)
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@axeminister thanks Dustin. I PM’d you.

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, P

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Topic starter Posted : April 24, 2021 3:50 pm
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Cray Dimensional
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Thank you everyone for your offers of critiques. I have reached out to all of you with PM. I think I have enough reviewers for now, but I learned from 2nd QTR when I sent out my story that I had made some significant changes afterword. So I hope you don't mind if tap for one or two more reviews in about 2 weeks. I would like to stagger the phone a friends a little.

Small steps add up to miles.
V38: R, P

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Topic starter Posted : April 25, 2021 11:58 am
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CeciBlack
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Posted by: @craydimensional

Thank you everyone for your offers of critiques. I have reached out to all of you with PM. I think I have enough reviewers for now, but I learned from 2nd QTR when I sent out my story that I had made some significant changes afterword. So I hope you don't mind if tap for one or two more reviews in about 2 weeks. I would like to stagger the phone a friends a little.

Hey Cray, if you still want fresh eyes on this one, PM me.

Ceci

 

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