Hi All,
I've got a 7,300-word story for Q3 that is in the final editing stages. Looking for overall impressions, flow, and any obvious continuity errors I missed. Happy to read and critique in return either now or nearer the submission date. (@clfors is in my writing group, so she's already read it).
Thanks!
V33- SF
V38- SHM, HM
V39- HM,R
V40- Q3 pending
I can take a quick look if you still need another set of eyes.
my comments sent via PM!
thanks for letting me take a look, really enjoyed the tale 😀
Gideon
Writers of the Future:
2024 Q1: Written Q2: WIP Q3: ? Q4: ?
2023 Q1: RWC Q2: SHM Q3: SHM Q4: Submitted
2022 Q4: R
Submissions to other markets:
2023: 69 submitted 12 acceptances
2022: 22 submitted 1 acceptance
Hi @wahlquistj, I'm happy to take a look. I'm still hammering out my story (reworking an old HM that I think has more potential) but am hoping to have something to send out next week, so would welcome a swap. Feel free to send my way. 
SHM x1
HM x10
R Lots
Thanks @bzelger and @adrian! I'm making a few tweaks based on @gideonpsmith's feedback (and critiquing his) and then I'll send it to you folks.
V33- SF
V38- SHM, HM
V39- HM,R
V40- Q3 pending
@bzelger I sent out your copy through the messenger. Thank you so much everyone!
V33- SF
V38- SHM, HM
V39- HM,R
V40- Q3 pending
